AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1 (8700/1) - 23rd May 2024 [Exam Chat]

Reply 180

Ronaldofrom24

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by suitable-fairgro

im arguing with you like mary argued with ****

lol nice simile

Reply 181

Sobbingsoobin

15

how was it? i thought the extract was pretty good and detailed, but my q5 sucked a bit cause my teacher always told me never to write dialogue but it was a disagreement so i had to, but it sucked so bad lol its ok cause i had rlly nice description

Reply 182

ndjdsvdwhdgbh

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Who else wrote about the elephant story in their question 5

Reply 183

Sobbingsoobin

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by ndjdsvdwhdgbh

Who else wrote about the elephant story in their question 5

one of my friends did

Reply 184

Ronaldofrom24

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by Sobbingsoobin

how was it? i thought the extract was pretty good and detailed, but my q5 sucked a bit cause my teacher always told me never to write dialogue but it was a disagreement so i had to, but it sucked so bad lol its ok cause i had rlly nice description

No no, limit speech. All you have to do is describe the disagreement. I wrote about why they are disagreeing and it then turned violent and abusive which ended in death using a lot of description of course.

Reply 185

Sobbingsoobin

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by Ronaldofrom24

No no, limit speech. All you have to do is describe the disagreement. I wrote about why they are disagreeing and it then turned violent and abusive which ended in death using a lot of description of course.

it was only a few lines of speech so i wasnt too worried, but i wrote about this guy who crashed into this girls car and then just said nah im not paying and continued driving lol

Reply 186

q466iss

4

if someone were to have copied a lot of the extract and included that in the descriptive writing, what would happen?

Reply 187

Ronaldofrom24

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by q466iss

if someone were to have copied a lot of the extract and included that in the descriptive writing, what would happen?

Yeah that is long. Long day for u bro. You should not be doing that.

Reply 188

Ronaldofrom24

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Bois I looked up ending online and Mary dies

Reply 189

Ronaldofrom24

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by Ronaldofrom24

Bois I looked up ending online and Mary dies

So it’s not all happy,

Reply 190

Sobbingsoobin

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by Ronaldofrom24

Bois I looked up ending online and Mary dies

what rlly, why? bro was too powerless

Reply 191

Ronaldofrom24

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by Sobbingsoobin

what rlly, why? bro was too powerless

Moses killed her

Reply 192

Sobbingsoobin

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by q466iss

if someone were to have copied a lot of the extract and included that in the descriptive writing, what would happen?

examiner would know and mark you down for it, lets just hope you wrote some other stuff too thats worth marks

Reply 193

Ronaldofrom24

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Guys I found the whole book in pdf online who wants to read it

Reply 194

Sobbingsoobin

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by Ronaldofrom24

Moses killed her

google said it was a houseboy or smth, i thought it would be **** ngl, what a ****

Reply 195

Sobbingsoobin

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by Ronaldofrom24

Guys I found the whole book in pdf online who wants to read it

i am not reading a single book ever again in my life after gcses.

Reply 196

Ronaldofrom24

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by Sobbingsoobin

i am not reading a single book ever again in my life after gcses.

I am going to read books for my entire life, I love english

Reply 197

Prabbbyy

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by Ronaldofrom24

Guys I found the whole book in pdf online who wants to read it

me!

Reply 198

Ronaldofrom24

4

Anyone know what chapter extract was taken from?

Reply 199

strace17

1

In the creative writing i couldn’t think of anything to do for disagreement so I did the descriptive writing but I started describing the desert but then I wrote about how these 2 hunters shot an elephant. The problem is I used dialogue, and things happen in order. I realise now that i completely misunderstood the description question. How cooked am I? how many marks am I limited to if I include dialogue and chronological story in the description question?

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