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AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1 (8700/1) - 23rd May 2024 [Exam Chat]

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by Pwca
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Hi guys what do you think of this structure I am going to try and use in my work tomorrow?

This is for question 5 and is a rough idea of how I am going to structure my answer

Description of the weather
Description of Landscape/ Horizon
Zoom in on object in photo
Zoom in on object in photo
Zoom in on object in photo
Zoom back out to landscape

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by georgebuckett77
Hi guys what do you think of this structure I am going to try and use in my work tomorrow?
This is for question 5 and is a rough idea of how I am going to structure my answer
Description of the weather
Description of Landscape/ Horizon
Zoom in on object in photo
Zoom in on object in photo
Zoom in on object in photo
Zoom back out to landscape

That seems good, there's 3 zooming in on objects, wonder if you could whittle that down to just one or two in depth rather than 3? also, what 'objects' are you planning on doing, because i think it might be good to just do one or two in more detail. also, i'd suggest including a short paragraph / one sentence paragraph somewhere for effect, even if it's just at the end or the start, but other than that, pretty solid, just don't forget literary devices, punctuation and amibitious vocab :smile:

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by DylanPii
However much you can write in 45 minutes - there's not really a set minimum, but quality is always better than quantity (as long as you write like at least a page). I'm sure people have gotten grade 9s with a page and a bit of really good writing. I'm also sure you won't be counting your words as you write, and the examiner certainly won't be either 😅

my teacher said to get high marks you need atleast two pages because that counts as extended writing, (this is for story )

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could be cooked.

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Any predictions for the picture

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by mariakharch
Any predictions for the picture

yh its gonna be 3 kids playing on a swing in a l
Park

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by swerdb
what's the average amount people write though? I don't want too seem like I'm lacking...
I can write 10 pages easy

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by Ronaldofrom24
I can write 10 pages easy

quality > quantity :smile:

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Who is doing q5 first?

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by Liqht
quality > quantity :smile:
No I’m talking about a girl meet a boy and boy gets rejected. That’s my plot

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by Ronaldofrom24
Who is doing q5 first?


I did, also how u guys find it

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What was question 5

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by mayapple
What was question 5


A photo of the desert or a sorry about a disagreement

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It wasn’t too bad but I think last years paper was better although I did answer all the questions decently
I did the picture description for question 5

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Was anyone else fighting the urge to quote Ozymandias in question 5, or was that just me?

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by azaaaa9000
Was anyone else fighting the urge to quote Ozymandias in question 5, or was that just me?


I did quote it 😂

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by mayapple
What was question 5

I did the photo - was a desert pic but said to write about a "hot place" so I just focused on the sun's heat and ignored the desert.

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by Nrrksssgucfb
A photo of the desert or a sorry about a disagreement

Was there anything to zoom in on?

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I'm so glad I memorised a whole description of a hot description from lighthubtutors🙏
(edited 1 year ago)

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by Sparky5
Was there anything to zoom in on?

There were trees, a bird and mountains in the distant

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