heyy, i was struggling with essay technique for a while, and what really helped me start consistently getting 24/30+ was splitting my essay plans into AO1, AO2, AO3 for both sides of an argument
e.g. (paragraph plan for a full-mark essay on whether the EU is a superpower - yes its global but its the same technique for all 30 markers)
Military:
AO3 Arguably EU has significant military power
AO1 - Common Foreign and Security Policy - 12 civilian + 9 military missions around the world, NATO acts as military force
AO2 - therefore somewhat unified in its approach
AO3 Actually EU is not a significant military power
AO1 - Cannot unify around Israel or Palestine, split over Iraq War 2003, split over Libya 2011
AO2 - not a unified force as can’t take decisive action
AO1 - despite large combined individual budget, EU’s entire armed forces = 49 tanks and 400 soldiers, US has 700+ military bases, 11 aircraft carriers and largest budget in the world of ~$800B
AO2 - not comparable
AO1 - US biggest contributor of NATO + not all EU countries are members
AO2 - therefore NATO shouldn’t be considered an EU military force
Mini-conclusion - summarise
I know we don’t have plans in the exam (obvi) but its good practice before then so you get used to systematically going through each AO, i hope this helps, and good luck in ur exams !! not long to go now 😭😭