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A-Level English Literature essays

I'm in Year 13 studying English Literature on the Eduqas exam board. As part of my revision, I'm planning various essays for my texts (Eliot-Hardy, Chaucer, Loot-Revenger's, King Lear), and I was wondering if it would be okay if I only had two points in my essays? This is more about the drama essays as I find the poetry paper a bit easier, but I've been struggling with having under-developed points, and was thinking whether I would be punished by the markers for only having two points, which hopefully would be more developed. I'm aiming for a B in the final exams.

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Original post by pjf1215
I'm in Year 13 studying English Literature on the Eduqas exam board. As part of my revision, I'm planning various essays for my texts (Eliot-Hardy, Chaucer, Loot-Revenger's, King Lear), and I was wondering if it would be okay if I only had two points in my essays? This is more about the drama essays as I find the poetry paper a bit easier, but I've been struggling with having under-developed points, and was thinking whether I would be punished by the markers for only having two points, which hopefully would be more developed. I'm aiming for a B in the final exams.


the exam is literally tmrw i’ve just seen this eliot and hardy two points is fine the rest is say three

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Original post by b_b101
the exam is literally tmrw i’ve just seen this eliot and hardy two points is fine the rest is say three

How did you find it yesterday?

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Original post by pjf1215
How did you find it yesterday?


very mixed. i do john donne for part a and my 20 mark answer is definitely the worst one ive ever written. the 40 mark was ok nothing terrible. i did the question in pessimism for hardy and eliot and i had a lot to say i just wrote it in about 35 mins so im not entirely sure if was my best work. how was it for you

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Original post by b_b101
very mixed. i do john donne for part a and my 20 mark answer is definitely the worst one ive ever written. the 40 mark was ok nothing terrible. i did the question in pessimism for hardy and eliot and i had a lot to say i just wrote it in about 35 mins so im not entirely sure if was my best work. how was it for you

Sort of similar, I do Chaucer for Part A, and yeah the extract was whack, and the whole text essay was very mid. Nearly everyone I spoke to has done the pessimism for Hardy Eliot, I tried to start planning it but couldn't think of good arguments for some reason so switched to the appeal to the readers question, which I quite liked because of the critical quote in the question, but I can never tell how Hardy-Eliot essays go, because before I thought I did really well and ended up getting a C. Onto Drama now

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Original post by pjf1215
Sort of similar, I do Chaucer for Part A, and yeah the extract was whack, and the whole text essay was very mid. Nearly everyone I spoke to has done the pessimism for Hardy Eliot, I tried to start planning it but couldn't think of good arguments for some reason so switched to the appeal to the readers question, which I quite liked because of the critical quote in the question, but I can never tell how Hardy-Eliot essays go, because before I thought I did really well and ended up getting a C. Onto Drama now


honestly relatable… english is so scary you have no idea how it’s gone. i’m dreading king lear bc i still don’t know how to do a good 45 marker

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Original post by b_b101
honestly relatable… english is so scary you have no idea how it’s gone. i’m dreading king lear bc i still don’t know how to do a good 45 marker

Neither tbh, I did a couple in class but my teacher didn't mark it because of my handwriting. I'll probably just end up having a really basic structure of intro, point 1 centred around 1, perhaps 2 scenes or important moments, and then point 2 doing the same thing. Sprinkle some AO3 and AO5 in there and hope it does the job

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Original post by pjf1215
I'm in Year 13 studying English Literature on the Eduqas exam board. As part of my revision, I'm planning various essays for my texts (Eliot-Hardy, Chaucer, Loot-Revenger's, King Lear), and I was wondering if it would be okay if I only had two points in my essays? This is more about the drama essays as I find the poetry paper a bit easier, but I've been struggling with having under-developed points, and was thinking whether I would be punished by the markers for only having two points, which hopefully would be more developed. I'm aiming for a B in the final exams.

Have you tried using Tilf? They give you feedback based on Eduqas scheme so you can see if 2 points is enough

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Original post by sarahchrysan
Have you tried using Tilf? They give you feedback based on Eduqas scheme so you can see if 2 points is enough


wait is this a website? my teachers are good at marking i just don’t think they’ll have time write as many essays i want to in the next few days

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Original post by b_b101
wait is this a website? my teachers are good at marking i just don’t think they’ll have time write as many essays i want to in the next few days


time to mark as many essays i want to write **

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Original post by pjf1215
Neither tbh, I did a couple in class but my teacher didn't mark it because of my handwriting. I'll probably just end up having a really basic structure of intro, point 1 centred around 1, perhaps 2 scenes or important moments, and then point 2 doing the same thing. Sprinkle some AO3 and AO5 in there and hope it does the job


i’d say defo do three points if u can at least that’s what i’ve been taught and i’m sorry your teacher is literally NOT doing their job ??

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