Tips on 12 marker eng

tips on getting at least 10/9/11 out of 12 marks in igcse question 4 English lang, i used to always get 10s but i got an 8 for my last 2 mocks 😭 what i usually do is i write a tiny introductory line and then pick around 3-4 good points that answers the question and further emphasize on them, i did that for both my mocks but i ended up with 8/12, can anyone tell me any other strategy that will u get get like 10-11... 🙂

I think ur structure is good, js write more yk, and try to answer more past paper qs timed! Dw you'll get a good mark coz after all it really depends on the examiner mostly but just practice as much as u can from ur end, and go prepared