History edexcel Alevel

Does anyone know an A* or A level structure for the essays in the edexcel history exams, because i'm stuck on a B/A and I really would like to be secure on an A.
Any help would be great!!!!

It's typically not structure that separates an A from an A*. Firstly, it's the level of detail. As an examiner, one can see the "wow factor" in that this candidate really knows her stuff. More importantly, however, is argumentation. Are you driving an argument? Are you explaining why you believe what you believe.

I feel like i'm doing this though, but my teachers keep giving me the same marks. Is it referring back to the question or my argument after each point, that I'm supposed to be doing or something different?

I'd have to see a question and an answer to help.

It's typically not structure that separates an A from an A*. Firstly, it's the level of detail. As an examiner, one can see the "wow factor" in that this candidate really knows her stuff. More importantly, however, is argumentation. Are you driving an argument? Are you explaining why you believe what you believe.

I have a question! So I keep getting feedback that I need to put in criteria but how do I do this? Like I struggle with criteria a lot and judgement. Could you give any advice?

I found for criteria that I need to figure out what I'm arguing (whether or not I agree with the question) and then picking out why I think this e.g. is it the longevity or the scale (this could be for opposition) or maybe the impact on the population (effectiveness (this for economic policies for example)) and then embedding that every time I make a point. For example I could say that the fall of the Weimar Republic was due to the opposition as a result of the poor economy because of the longevity of poor conditions and the impact on the people. Rather than the fall of the Weimar Republic was due to opposition to the Treaty of Versailles as this didn't have as big of an impact on the people because so many still chose to vote (show of support).
Is this okay?

That’s awesome yea, thanks. What about like judgement?