character mind maps are great but you're running out of time. you need to start practicing essays. practice past papers, predicted questions, even make your own questions up and answer them. JUST PRACTICE AS MUCH AS YOU CAN.
if you still don't have a teacher/have a bad teacher then go to your head of department for english or another teacher and ask them to mark your essays. it doesn't matter if they aren't your teacher, they're still there to help students SO USE THEM!
it's great if you get 25/30, 28/30 etc. but please don't stop doing essay questions. even if you get 30/30 keep practicing. you NEED to nail down your exam technique, your timing, your structure etc.
PLEASE TIME YOUR ESSAYS. timing is super important for english so try and complete your essays under time limit.
memorise quotes using flashcards and pick quotes THAT YOU KNOW HOW TO ANALYSE AND THE ONES THAT CONTAIN ANALYSIS THAT YOU ACTUALLY UNDERSTAND. please don't pick out quotes you can only analyse on surface level, you won't get the top grades. memorise quotes that you can analyse in depth and the ones that you know you can accurately link to context and the actual question. DON'T THROW IN QUOTES UNRELATED TO THE QUESTION!
here's the structure i use for my essays:
overarching statement/thesis statement - make it hooking and mention everything you're going to talk about in your essay here. if it's a 'how does X character change throughout the play/novel?' then briefly mention how they progress using an arc (start, middle, end). we both do an inspector calls so let me give you an example.
'how does sheila change throughout an inspector calls?'
The play commences with Sheila Birling depicted as naive and immature. She has no understanding of the suffering the working class go through and initially portrays childlike behaviour when referring to her parents at the start of the play. Gradually, she begins to develop and become more assertive and confident, standing up for herself, especially when confronting Gerald about his affair with Daisy and voicing her opinions throughout the questioning while the Inspector is around. Slowly, she starts understanding the cruel conditions the working class live in, and what people like Eva experience. Through this, she begins to become more understanding of real-world struggles and towards the end of the play she takes responsibility for her actions and is more aware. Her character is cleverly employed by Priestley to convey his opinions on socialism. Using Sheila, he highlights the differences between the older and younger generation's response to the Inspector's warning, as Sheila takes responsibility for her actions while her parents don't and is hopeful for society to execute a more socialist view.
okay it's a bit long, it could be a bit more specific but ii think what you get what i mean by the arc (hopefully).
use fancy words (employs, constructs etc.) when talking about how the writer uses the characters to convey something.
notice how i didn't start with 'Sheila changes in An Inspector Calls by...' THAT'S BORING. The examiner is going to read hundreds of essays with the exact same beginning. make yours STAND OUT. make it INTERESTING and capture the examiner's interest.
paragraph 1 - on extract and normally i use the structure:
point
embed quote
sometimes basic analysis (verb, noun)
complex analysis (metaphor, juxtaposition) and writer's intention (what ideas are created? why? etc.)
if possible connotations of a word so basically zoom in
and an alternative interpretation to my quote
CONTEXT THAT RELATES TO THE QUESTION
and link back.
paragraph 2 - should still be on extract (if we aren't talking about inspector calls)
paragraph 3 - referring to whole text (if we aren't talking about inspector calls)
paragraph 4 - referring to whole text (if we aren't talking about inspector calls)
conclusion - this doesn't get you more marks but it rounds off your essay and impresses the examiner so please please finish with a well written conclusion.
write more paragraphs if you have time and you don't have to do 2 on the extract and 2 on the whole text but it's how i prefer to do it.
good luck!
(i hate romeo and juliet sorry just had to put it out there).