History Help

I'm a history teacher. Exam boards IGCSE Pearson and CAIE International A-Level. I can help with technique questions and the following topics:
Nazi Germany
Fascist Italy
Soviet Russia
Cold War
Modern China
Modern Britain
Tudors
American and British Politics

I am year 12 student studying Edxcel Russia 1917-1991 and Britain, I am facing a problem that unclear with structure and myteacher told me that I am a too general sometimes.(This situation start from my first mock exam, before the mock my practices are normally 20/25, I don't know why it happened suddenly), my AS final exam is in May ,please help meee

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would you mind I send to your profile tomorrow? (because I'm new to the student room so I need to wait for three days then I can send profile)

I’ll be sitting for my Pearson Edexcel IGCSE History exams in May/June, and I’m worried about not being able to secure my Level 9. I’m doing Germany and Cold War for Paper 1, and Russia and China for Paper 2. Would you happen to have any top-level exemplar essays? Additionally, would you mind outlining what the general structure of each section should look like, especially the Part (c) 16-marker? Thank you so much in advance!