GCSE lang creative writing?

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Reply 1

LucieBu

As long as you described it it should be fine, I strayed quite far from the stimulus photo too

Reply 2

Tryingtohelpout

Original post by luciebu

As long as you described it it should be fine, I strayed quite far from the stimulus photo too

Bro forgot the semicolon in his reply

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Reply 3

LucieBu

Original post by Tryingtohelpout

Bro forgot the semicolon in his reply

But I didn't in the real exam

Reply 4

Tryingtohelpout

Original post by b_____

Hey I just did my language paper 1, and for question 5, they ask you to write a description for a photo, or a story with a prompt. I chose the photo but I essentially ended up writing a story 😭 is this really bad? I ended up doing a whole flashback and story to how they got back to the present, and I’m scared it’s not really a description anymore. I described the picture at the start, but then I moved on and started describing the landscape in the flashback which was completely different. Did I mess up :frown:

If it has a storyline and there is some sort of progression, then there is a problem. If you're progressing time, like a sunset going into night, then I'm sure that's fine.

EDIT: As you have a flashback, if that's a big focus of your response, then uh oh. It's just merely a description.