AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1

So while I was doing question 5, I realised half way through I hadn’t done any paragraphs. I corrected it within the rest of my work, and the big chunk I hadn’t I put in //paragraph to signal where the paragraph would be. Would I be marked for that?
Also the story I wrote had to be about a disagreement, do I did it on a submissive - dominant duo of criminals who had kidnapped someone. Then the dominant one within the duo wanted the submissive one to pull the trigger, but as the submissive one kept saying no, the dominant one kept persisting on it. That makes it clear it’s a disagreement, right?
Sorry for rambling on, i’m just deeping it all now 😭