Would someone kingly help me and score this out of 8 I’m desperately trying for a grade 9
In contrast to the treatment of children in Source B, the children from Source A are treated harshly, however, are still shown some affection and consideration. This is shown when the writer says that if they have “earned” the “privilege”, then maybe they can spend time on the “Xbox”. This would suggest that if the children have completed their obligatory acts, then they would have the privilege to have fun on the Xbox. From this I can draw the inference that the children are treated with care and affection, but still have to atone for their immoral actions. I can further infer that the children in Source A are still being granted the chance to experience a fun childhood while simultaneously carrying out their chores. This is very different to Source B, in which the children are treated with less affection.
The treatment of children is much more harsh and strict in comparison to Source A, when they are depicted as having a “face” of “grey” and “yellowish” and “silky”, while “begging” to be “let out.” This implies that the children are poorly treated, which is shown in their appearance and desperation to be free. From this I can draw the inference that the children from Source B are neglected and so are their rights to having a liberal and fun childhood experience. From this I can also deduce that the children are treated and neglected just like animals as they are compared to “prey”, with the look of the “terror” of a “hunted animal” in their “eyes”, which further shows how they are more dehumanized than the children from Source A.