English language paper 1 QUESTION 5 help

Hi so the question was on a hot place and I wrote about in paragraph 1 the sun being blazing hot and about the air being humid however in paragraph 2 I wrote about a mounting and how the sand was losing layers the higher you went up like skin being peeled off. I then said looking to your left yku could see golden sand going on for miles then said if you look right you see a village.
In my paragraph 3 I talk about a path having a coating of sand on it and people wearing hats to protect themselves from the sun on camels transporting water to the village. I then describe a house.
In paragraph 4 I describe the inside of the house.
Im worried I didn't answer the question about it being a hot place and stressing about it I really want to get a 4