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Linking two paragraphs to the same topic for importance AQA A Level Biology Essay

This might be a bad example but if one paragraph was on the calvin cycle and another was on oxyhaemoglobin dissociation and for importance i related both to respiration, would that be okay as long as the justification is specific to the main topic?
Original post by itjirl
This might be a bad example but if one paragraph was on the calvin cycle and another was on oxyhaemoglobin dissociation and for importance i related both to respiration, would that be okay as long as the justification is specific to the main topic?
Yeah should be fine as long as the content/science part of the paragraphs are different spec points, I've done the same in mock essays and it's always been okay
Just for a bit of variety with the importances, if I was writing about the dissociation curve I'd link that to respiration and what ATP is needed for, and for importance of Calvin cycle/photosynthesis I'd talk about uses of the organic molecules made in plants, such as the cellulose cell wall allowing cells to stay turgid + have high Ψ which allows photosynthesis to keep occurring and then possibly link that to resp if I have space/time
But as long as the main bulk of the paragraph is 2 different spec points, anything related to those paragraphs is okay to write about for importance :smile:
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Original post by its.scphie
Yeah should be fine as long as the content/science part of the paragraphs are different spec points, I've done the same in mock essays and it's always been okay
Just for a bit of variety with the importances, if I was writing about the dissociation curve I'd link that to respiration and what ATP is needed for, and for importance of Calvin cycle/photosynthesis I'd talk about uses of the organic molecules made in plants, such as the cellulose cell wall allowing cells to stay turgid + have high Ψ which allows photosynthesis to keep occurring and then possibly link that to resp if I have space/time
But as long as the main bulk of the paragraph is 2 different spec points, anything related to those paragraphs is okay to write about for importance :smile:
thanks so much we haven't had the chance to do any mock essays yet in school haha so i was a little worried. that's a good point too x
good luck on wednesday by the way we've got this 🙏 :smile:
Original post by itjirl
thanks so much we haven't had the chance to do any mock essays yet in school haha so i was a little worried. that's a good point too x
good luck on wednesday by the way we've got this 🙏 :smile:
thank you!! you too, we’re gonna smash it💪

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