A-Level History Help

I've been getting low/ medium level 3 in my essays for AQA. What do I need to do to get into a high level 4? (The more detailed the better.)

I am doing Russia 2n and British empire. For essays, I do short intro explaining if I agree or disagree with the statement and state my factors. I write 3 PEEL paragraphs with 2-3 evidence each ( for Russia I try to include stats or detailed evidence because it is the depth course). Then I conclude by stating if I agree with question, write my factors and summarise arguments. For british empire source, I do 3 paragraphs write if the argument is convincing ang how much (highly, slightly, not) and why. Then I get a quote and explain it and back it up with evidence from my own knowledge 3 times in one paragraph. I do this 3 times for each source and write a conclusion. For russia source, I do a similar structure but instead of talking about if it is convincing I talk about relevance, reliability,revelation and if the source is valuable.

Ok, first of all try looking on quizlet for essay plan flashcards. I don't know if they will have any for your subjects but it's worth a try. Also, I highly recommend downloading everything you can on the AQA website for those topics. They have comments on all the model answers. Level 3 response can have initial judgements but aren't developed enough. You have to make sure every single thing you say is linked to the question.Everything has to be evaluative, not a narrative of what happened for a few sentences then a sentence saying "this supports the view that ... Was successful". If you make a claim, it must be backed up by evidence.Your argument has to be balanced but leaning slightly to one side. I feel your pain as I continuously wrote level 4 answers and often didn't know what to do to improve. I suggest that you download the answers and commentaries for ALL the history topics, including ones you're not doing. If the commentary says "level 5 answer" then read what the examiner comments are and try to see if you are doing that with your own work. I know the mark scheme is kind of messed up 😭, do ask me if there's anything else I can do to help!

Thank youuuu!! I’m gonna do this.Is it okay if I write an essay and send it to u.

Thank youuuu!! I’m gonna do this.Is it okay if I write an essay and send it to u.

I'm on the aqa website looking at 2022 british empire paper and I cant find any exemplar paragraphs, only evidence.