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Nursing proofread/ someone who can check my paper

Hi guys,

I really need your help. I am retaking an essay again and it's due next week.

I had tried to get in contact with the marker, no repsonse.

Is there a website or someone who will be able to read my essay which I had amended to from the feedback I had recieved through my marker?

I have written it but I would like someone to read it and give me a heads up if I had covered all the missing aims in my paper?
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Original post by a6xgg
Hi guys,
I really need your help. I am retaking an essay again and it's due next week.
I had tried to get in contact with the marker, no repsonse.
Is there a website or someone who will be able to read my essay which I had amended to from the feedback I had recieved through my marker?
I have written it but I would like someone to read it and give me a heads up if I had covered all the missing aims in my paper?

I would put your essay to one side for a couple of days, then read through it with a fresh mind. Make a note of what the aims of the essay are, then go through the essay and identify where it meets those aims.

Getting someone else to do this puts you at risk of collusion if they start making suggestions as to how you can improve you work.

I am worried that you say you're "retaking an essay again" and that you've "amended [it] from the feedback" from the marker.

You need to be sure that you're allowed to resubmit the same work with amendments, rather than writing a new piece of work from scratch. If that's not allowed, you're running a risk of being accused of self-plagiarism.
have you ever used a proofreading service? theyre actually quite cheap depending on what you want and how many words. and some will give you feedback too which ive alwats found to be helpful
Original post by flor9021
have you ever used a proofreading service? theyre actually quite cheap depending on what you want and how many words. and some will give you feedback too which ive alwats found to be helpful

oh, just realise this was many month ago. I hope everything work out for you
Original post by flor9021
have you ever used a proofreading service? theyre actually quite cheap depending on what you want and how many words. and some will give you feedback too which ive alwats found to be helpful

And they then sell that essay online - they are essay mills in disguise - do not use them.

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