Hi guys any game devs who can give me feedback on my game

Hey guys so I've made my game for my task, but in order to complete the other task I need feedback to continue, so I already gave feedback to myself because I know game dev's are probably busy but I need a email from a game developer with all the feedback on it so all I need is your email with all the feedback I gave myself but the other issue is I'm not great at fixing errors in my game but I guess I'll have to figure out myself any help is appreciated.