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economics personal statement

HI, im going into year 13 but im really struggling to even get my first draft of my personal statement done. i have done some things to put onto it, such as the st andrews sutton trust summer school, and i am also volunteering at a charity helping with local corporate social responsibilty, however im not sure how to inegrate that into the personal statement and how to start it off. i dont want to do the generic "my passion for economics blah blah blah" but i also dont want to do anything too abstract so any advice would be great. im also going to read some books on sustainable economics that the economics lecturer at st andrews recommended me, but i still feel like thats not enough for a competitve application. im also slightly worried that all of my points and books will be about sustainable economics when not all the courses ive looked into are centred around that, any advice is appreciated :smile:
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My tip for your statement- structure it in the vein of "This entry - level book/experience/job developed my interest in a particular area of econ, so I read this book on it. This is what it made me question (show that you've engaged with the ideas in the book, not just that you've read it) . These books then led me to go read this article..." etc. My extracurriculars worked well with development economics, so i researched into that. I then followed the paper trail (by writing about metrics of prosperity I'd read about) into econometrics. For you, you could link your experience volunteering for your corporate responsibility charity, say it made you realise the importance of sustainable economics in general and not just locally, and then say it led you to go read those books. And if those books are ones everyone is likely to have read, go read more. The most important thing is that you demonstrate your passion for the subject by showing you've engaged with it of your own volition, not telling them you're passionate about it. And if you're really struggling, write the start first. Also , you don't need that many flashy extracurriculars to be competitive - they don't matter as much as showing you've really engaged with the subject. What you've done so far sounds great. :smile:
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Original post by stabbynarhwal131
My tip for your statement- structure it in the vein of "This entry - level book/experience/job developed my interest in a particular area of econ, so I read this book on it. This is what it made me question (show that you've engaged with the ideas in the book, not just that you've read it) . These books then led me to go read this article..." etc. My extracurriculars worked well with development economics, so i researched into that. I then followed the paper trail (by writing about metrics of prosperity I'd read about) into econometrics. For you, you could link your experience volunteering for your corporate responsibility charity, say it made you realise the importance of sustainable economics in general and not just locally, and then say it led you to go read those books. And if those books are ones everyone is likely to have read, go read more. The most important thing is that you demonstrate your passion for the subject by showing you've engaged with it of your own volition, not telling them you're passionate about it. And if you're really struggling, write the start first. Also , you don't need that many flashy extracurriculars to be competitive - they don't matter as much as showing you've really engaged with the subject. What you've done so far sounds great. :smile:

Thank you so much thats really great advice, would you say that the following are books that everyone would have read? "complexity economics and sustainable development: a computational framework for policy priority inference", "knowledge economy and sustainable economic development" and also the green room blog? as these were recommended to me by my lecturer.
Original post by zofiac
Thank you so much thats really great advice, would you say that the following are books that everyone would have read? "complexity economics and sustainable development: a computational framework for policy priority inference", "knowledge economy and sustainable economic development" and also the green room blog? as these were recommended to me by my lecturer.

No, those don't seem like books everyone would have read. Particularly with the specificity of the area you've picked. They seem like they'll be great for your statement. I would recommend reading more than three books, but otherwise looks like you're off to a great start with those 🙂
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Original post by stabbynarhwal131
No, those don't seem like books everyone would have read. Particularly with the specificity of the area you've picked. They seem like they'll be great for your statement. I would recommend reading more than three books, but otherwise looks like you're off to a great start with those 🙂

ah ok ill try to find some more good books then , thank you so much for your help!
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Original post by stabbynarhwal131
My tip for your statement- structure it in the vein of "This entry - level book/experience/job developed my interest in a particular area of econ, so I read this book on it. This is what it made me question (show that you've engaged with the ideas in the book, not just that you've read it) . These books then led me to go read this article..." etc. My extracurriculars worked well with development economics, so i researched into that. I then followed the paper trail (by writing about metrics of prosperity I'd read about) into econometrics. For you, you could link your experience volunteering for your corporate responsibility charity, say it made you realise the importance of sustainable economics in general and not just locally, and then say it led you to go read those books. And if those books are ones everyone is likely to have read, go read more. The most important thing is that you demonstrate your passion for the subject by showing you've engaged with it of your own volition, not telling them you're passionate about it. And if you're really struggling, write the start first. Also , you don't need that many flashy extracurriculars to be competitive - they don't matter as much as showing you've really engaged with the subject. What you've done so far sounds great. :smile:


Hello I am also a yr13 ,just had my first week. I went through a similar mind blank but just started for now, did something similar to what you said. But about the book, as I was interested in behavioural economics I done courses and found couple books recommended by professor. Do you think it's good enough to put in my ps or do they need to be something else? Also regarding the last para(sports and other non academic stuff) is there something that you would specifically recommend.

Unis I am trying for are lse(maybe), ucl, imperial, Queen and uni City london

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