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I have an essay due on "evaluating the design argument", yet I struggle to recognise how to adequately structure my essays for the highest grades. Does anyone have any essays they can drop below, or maybe links to essays that I can review? Thank you!!
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Original post by fathermars
I have an essay due on "evaluating the design argument", yet I struggle to recognise how to adequately structure my essays for the highest grades. Does anyone have any essays they can drop below, or maybe links to essays that I can review? Thank you!!

Which exam board?

In general for the structure:
Start with an intro

Explain the design argument, often associated with the teleological argument.

Clearly state your position on the argument. Are you critiquing it, supporting it, ...

Paragraphs

Paragraph 1: Present the basics of the design argument. Historically, figures like William Paley, who likened the universe to a watch, might be mentioned here.

Paragraph 2: Discuss major supports for the design argument. For instance, you could explore how perceived patterns and complexities in nature (like the human eye) are used to support the idea of a designer.

Paragraph 3: Critique the argument. This could involve discussing critiques such as David Hume’s, who argues that complexity does not necessarily imply design, or bringing up problems like the argument from poor design.

Paragraph 4: Consider modern perspectives or scientific viewpoints, such as those from evolutionary biology, that challenge or reinterpret the design argument.

Paragraph 5: Discuss the implications of accepting or rejecting the design argument, both philosophically and practically.

Conclusion

recap the main arguments discussed and reiterate your thesis.

End with a thought-provoking statement or question


With AQA the most important is to always refer to the question and make sure you don't diverge from it!
You can try and draft an essay on Tilf and see the feedback it gives you. It's good at spotting if the structure makes sense ..
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Original post by lohiba
Which exam board?
In general for the structure:
Start with an intro

Explain the design argument, often associated with the teleological argument.

Clearly state your position on the argument. Are you critiquing it, supporting it, ...

Paragraphs

Paragraph 1: Present the basics of the design argument. Historically, figures like William Paley, who likened the universe to a watch, might be mentioned here.

Paragraph 2: Discuss major supports for the design argument. For instance, you could explore how perceived patterns and complexities in nature (like the human eye) are used to support the idea of a designer.

Paragraph 3: Critique the argument. This could involve discussing critiques such as David Hume’s, who argues that complexity does not necessarily imply design, or bringing up problems like the argument from poor design.

Paragraph 4: Consider modern perspectives or scientific viewpoints, such as those from evolutionary biology, that challenge or reinterpret the design argument.

Paragraph 5: Discuss the implications of accepting or rejecting the design argument, both philosophically and practically.

Conclusion

recap the main arguments discussed and reiterate your thesis.

End with a thought-provoking statement or question


With AQA the most important is to always refer to the question and make sure you don't diverge from it!
You can try and draft an essay on Tilf and see the feedback it gives you. It's good at spotting if the structure makes sense ..

Thank you so much! The board I'm under is, in fact, AQA :smile:
Original post by fathermars
I have an essay due on "evaluating the design argument", yet I struggle to recognise how to adequately structure my essays for the highest grades. Does anyone have any essays they can drop below, or maybe links to essays that I can review? Thank you!!


Hello, I have some that I can share with you. Hmu

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