oxford applicant help needed!!!

Hi guys,
My oxford teacher who I'm sort of relying on for personal statement feedback and practice paper feedback is taking forever to do stuff.
Obviously early applications are needed tomorrow, and he hasn't given me back my personal statement draft that I gave him two weeks ago despite a lot of turning up and asking.
I shouldn't have left it this late I completely say that, but it's just been four days (that I haven't been in school) that he said he would have the last adjustments ready for me by today (monday). He hasn't. I really need literally anyone who is familiar with history or maybe even english personal statements that could give it a read and tell me anything glaring that's wrong that needs fixing ASAP.
I'm already taking a gamble on this application because I don't really have the grades, so any help at all would be appreciated.
Message me if you can help!!!