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Reply 40

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by la.mgks_
I'll just take an example that I can actually explain
So for example the Wagner Act of 1935 which legitimised labourers to join/create trade unions.
I'd then go on to say that this meant that labourers had a sort of reliance on the federal government from this point forwards.
Using terms like "turning point" or "flashpoint" can also be used as analytical criteria.
So impact is like the consequences for certain groups of people, in the case of your question the consequences for the federal government.
Was this impact positive or negative?
Hope that helped


Another way of putting it is using PEEL structure, except it goes a bit more like:
Point, evidence and explain (x3) then link for each paragraph

Reply 41

Hi!
I’m a year 13 student who takes Edexcel A-Level History. I learn about Stuarts + Glorious Revolution (forgot the time line), Russian In Revolution and Black Civil Rights in America (1890s-2009)

Coursework is such a huge stretch for me as I am still very confused on what on earth I’m supposed to be doing.

Reply 42

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by erin11
Welcome to the A-level History Study Group!

Here you can chat with other students studying the same subjects as you and support each other as you head towards your exams :h:
You can post any useful tips and resources that you come across, offer support to others, share your successes, or just let it all out when it gets tough!
It is against the site rules to ask for or offer any copyrighted papers, or to take conversations off-site to do these things. Posts that break these rules will be removed.
A few icebreakers to kick things off:
What exam board are you with?
What do you enjoy most about this subject/ course?
What area do you struggle with in this subject/ course?
Good luck, together we can do this! :biggrin:
@Blinkr

Hi, I am a year 13 student who is currently predicted an A for history. I do the OCR exam board and study the units of Later Tudors, Democracy and Dictatorships in Germany and Civil Rights.

Reply 43

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by Cordrey96
Hi, I am a year 13 student who is currently predicted an A for history. I do the OCR exam board and study the units of Later Tudors, Democracy and Dictatorships in Germany and Civil Rights.


Oooh finally another OCR victim!
We must be doing the same civil rights (in the USA) unit! How are you finding 30 mark interpretations essays?

Reply 44

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by la.mgks_
Oooh finally another OCR victim!
We must be doing the same civil rights (in the USA) unit! How are you finding 30 mark interpretations essays?

OCR for me too 😅 I am doing 5 A-Levels at the moment though so I don't know whether I'll drop history or not.

Reply 45

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by sdfj
OCR for me too 😅 I am doing 5 A-Levels at the moment though so I don't know whether I'll drop history or not.


5 a-levels? what other ones are you doing?

Reply 46

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by la.mgks_
5 a-levels? what other ones are you doing?

Maths and FM, Economics and Chemistry. Realistically should drop down to 4 as 5 is unsustainable.

Reply 47

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by sdfj
Maths and FM, Economics and Chemistry. Realistically should drop down to 4 as 5 is unsustainable.


Doing 5 is mental! I'm getting stressed out with 3 and 1 AS, can't imagine the content for 5 of them. But dropping one seems sensible if you're not sure if you can handle it

Reply 48

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by la.mgks_
Doing 5 is mental! I'm getting stressed out with 3 and 1 AS, can't imagine the content for 5 of them. But dropping one seems sensible if you're not sure if you can handle it

Honestly having a lot of content isn't the problem - I literally don't have enough time to do homework, and wouldn't have the time to do an EPQ, supercurriculars, so it's probably not a good idea. Content isn't too difficult but the amount of school-set work is unsustainable.
Would you say for a source essay introduction, comparing the authors and saying how useful the Author's sources are together and then doing the same for Time,Type and Audience is OK?

Reply 50

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by Geo Lover 7
Would you say for a source essay introduction, comparing the authors and saying how useful the Author's sources are together and then doing the same for Time,Type and Audience is OK?

What's the question (don't bother explaining the sources but the context of the question could help me answer)
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by sdfj
What's the question (don't bother explaining the sources but the context of the question could help me answer)
How far could the historian make use of Sources 1 and 2 together to investigate the seriousness of the threat posed by the March on Rome in October 1922?
Explain your answer, using both sources, the information given about them and your own knowledge of the historical context. (20)
I only need to do the introduction.
(edited 1 year ago)
My Introduction
"The author of Source 1 is Mussolini, who supports himself, while the author of Source 2 is
George Seldes, a staunch opposer of Mussolini. However when these 2 sources are used in
conjunction with each other they should present an unbiased version of events. Source 1
was produced by Mussolini’s newspaper during the March on Rome while Seldes’
second-hand account of events was published in 1935. These sources used together would
give 2 contrasting views from different perspectives on the March on Rome. The source type
of Source 1 is a newspaper article while the source type of Source 2 is a work of
historiography and these 2 types of sources being used together would work well, however,
the newspaper might be biased. The audience of Source 1 is the Italian Public while the
audience of Source 2 is English-speaking historians. These 2 sources give 2 different
perspectives of the Seriousness of the March on Rome for different audiences making them
useful to use together."
What do you think?

Reply 53

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by Geo Lover 7
How far could the historian make use of Sources 1 and 2 together to investigate the seriousness of the threat posed by the March on Rome in October 1922?
Explain your answer, using both sources, the information given about them and your own knowledge of the historical context.

Seems like the Sources agree then?

I'd approach it like this:

State whether (and how) the sources (dis)agree
Briefly explain the main message of both sources (and go on to explain the relation between the sources - ie. does one back up another, or similar...)
Write a judgement/thesis that states and explains your opinion in relation to the two sources and the seriousness of the threat... and so on.

In essence, your introduction should help you frame a series of arguments that will run like a thread through your essay. But how you do it is up to you.
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by sdfj
Seems like the Sources agree then?
I'd approach it like this:
State whether (and how) the sources (dis)agree
Briefly explain the main message of both sources (and go on to explain the relation between the sources - ie. does one back up another, or similar...)
Write a judgement/thesis that states and explains your opinion in relation to the two sources and the seriousness of the threat... and so on.
In essence, your introduction should help you frame a series of arguments that will run like a thread through your essay. But how you do it is up to you.
My Introduction is above on Reply 52.:ditto:

Reply 55

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by Geo Lover 7
My Introduction
"The author of Source 1 is Mussolini, who supports himself, while the author of Source 2 is
George Seldes, a staunch opposer of Mussolini. However when these 2 sources are used in
conjunction with each other they should present an unbiased version of events. Source 1
was produced by Mussolini’s newspaper during the March on Rome while Seldes’
second-hand account of events was published in 1935. These sources used together would
give 2 contrasting views from different perspectives on the March on Rome. The source type
of Source 1 is a newspaper article while the source type of Source 2 is a work of
historiography and these 2 types of sources being used together would work well, however,
the newspaper might be biased. The audience of Source 1 is the Italian Public while the
audience of Source 2 is English-speaking historians. These 2 sources give 2 different
perspectives of the Seriousness of the March on Rome for different audiences making them
useful to use together."
What do you think?

Decent attempt but I'd definitely explain what the sources are saying rather than going straight into reliability / type of source.

The question isn't asking: how far are these two types of sources useful for a historian judging this or that about Rome - that wouldn't really make much sense as a question.

You sort of do what I'm suggesting in the initial bits by explaining why they disagree, but you do need to briefly explain the source and explain how they disagree. I can paste an example from an essay I did a few months ago.

But equally your intro is "good enough"

Reply 56

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by sdfj
OCR for me too 😅 I am doing 5 A-Levels at the moment though so I don't know whether I'll drop history or not.

Omg we take really similar subjects, but I do the IB! I take what you take but English lit instead of economics. Realistically I'm going to drop chemistry as I want to do history at uni but I love all my subjects so much - it's like understanding how the world works & where everything comes from & where it's going & interactions between humans (english lit for me; econ for you!)
I've got a predicted grade of B in History!!! :woo: :party: :party2::rave:

Reply 58

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by Geo Lover 7
I've got a predicted grade of B in History!!! :woo: :party: :party2::rave:


Yay! well done 👏👏

Reply 59

Hi everyone! I'm in Y12 and and I do IB history - we're Apartheid in South Africa and Imperial Russia right now! I'm also doing an extended essay (basically an EPQ) and I've decided that I'm going to be doing it about the history of mathematics ~970-1200 in France and Italy.

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