How to improve this essay?
Hi all,
I'm currently studying A level economics but our end of year 12 mock will be an AS level so I'm practicing AS level questions and was looking for advice on how to improve this essay as it feels shallow, especially with the last paragraph. Many thanks!
Question: "Making use of the information in extract C, explain two possible reasons for the changes in the world price of chocolate bars"
Essay + Case study: https://imgur.com/a/11JPtV6
I'm currently studying A level economics but our end of year 12 mock will be an AS level so I'm practicing AS level questions and was looking for advice on how to improve this essay as it feels shallow, especially with the last paragraph. Many thanks!
Question: "Making use of the information in extract C, explain two possible reasons for the changes in the world price of chocolate bars"
Essay + Case study: https://imgur.com/a/11JPtV6
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