Ielts writing task1+2 (help me reach the final band for this writing, thank you!)
Task 1: Table
The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000
and 2005 (in millions).
Area 1990 1995 2000 2005
Africa 18.2 20.8 26.9 28.7
America 80.5 112.5 118.2 113.2
Asia and the Pacific 60.2 80.3 117.4 135.8
Europe 280.2 390.3 393.2 400.2
Middle East 9.8 11.3 13.5 15.8
Total 448.9 615.2 669.2 693.7
The given table depicts the changes in the statistics of international tourism of 5 difficult regions in four different years.
Overall, it is immediately obvious that the European area accounts for most of the total tourist amount every 5 years. In contrast, the Middle East area ranks last as shown in the table in the same period.
During the period from 1990 to 1995, the top ranked area, which is Europe, underwent a tremendous boom to 390.3 million visitors in 1995. Meanwhile, some regions such as America and Asia and the Pacific experienced moderate growth in the number of tourists, increasing by up to 30 million people compared to the previous years. In contrast, Africa and the Middle East regions experienced quite a modest increase, only about 1.5 to 2.6 million in 5 years.
Between 2000 and 2005, European areas witnessed a stability in the changes of tourist numbers. Its volume of international-travelling tourists increased by 2.9 to 7 million every five years with the statistics in 2005 doubling that of 1990. The figures in 2005 of Asia and the Pacific, Middle East and Africa showed an upward trend , over twice as many tourists as that of 1990 in Asia and the Pacific and Africa. Unlike other regions, America saw a slight decrease in the numbers, standing at 113.2 in with 5 million tourists fewer than in 2000. The total scale increased steadily with time, peaking at 693.7 million people in 2005.
Task 2
An increasing number of people choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve
their appearance. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you
think this is positive or negative development?
It is widely acknowledged that whether to undergo plastic surgery for better appearance or not is a heated debate. From my perspective,I wholeheartedly believe that this kind of operation delivers extensive drawbacks.
On the one hand, one of the most alarming aspects of the trend toward cosmetic surgery is the inherent risk it poses to individuals' health. Every year, numerous reports highlight failed surgeries that result in serious complications, including fatal outcomes and lifelong repercussions. These risks underscore the potential dangers of elective procedures that involve replacing body parts with artificial substances. The idea of replacing any body parts with artificial substances or chemical agents definitely involves aftereffects, to a greater or lesser extent. For example, rhinoplasty results in can lead to respiratory issues when the natural cartilages are removed to be replaced with a plastic or rubber one.Moreover, most of the current clinical centres offering services in plastic surgeries possess fraudulent permits or violate the laws in some ways, so it is open to doubt about the real reliability of their qualifications. The consequences of the surgeon's effects of surgery may not become apparent until later in life. However, when one gets older, abnormalities in facial expressions and musculature will get more apparent ,which is counterproductive to the primary wishes to enhance the outward appearances.Therefore,the potential dangers of surgery highlight a critical issue.
While the focus on outer beauty is prevalent, it is essential to recognize that a person's true identity lies in their inner qualities. However, the pervasive presence of surgically enhanced celebrities in the media often exacerbates this issue. This exposure creates an obsession with appearance, leading individuals to overlook their unique physical and mental attributes. Promoting the idea that a personshould be defined by their physical beauty is to promote a false set of values. The real value of a person is defined by their glowing characters, not by the superficial outer look.It is undeniable that everyone fancies being alluring and dazzling, but no one should gamble away their life, money and health on plastic surgery considering the risks it underlies. Instead, appropriate outfit, skin care, workout sessions and makeup looks transform people into glowing versions without posing hazards to their healthful conditions.
In conclusion , despite the constant advancement in cosmetic surgery in this age and age, it is crucial that people should prioritize their values first before deciding to undergo such a precarious process.
The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000
and 2005 (in millions).
Area 1990 1995 2000 2005
Africa 18.2 20.8 26.9 28.7
America 80.5 112.5 118.2 113.2
Asia and the Pacific 60.2 80.3 117.4 135.8
Europe 280.2 390.3 393.2 400.2
Middle East 9.8 11.3 13.5 15.8
Total 448.9 615.2 669.2 693.7
The given table depicts the changes in the statistics of international tourism of 5 difficult regions in four different years.
Overall, it is immediately obvious that the European area accounts for most of the total tourist amount every 5 years. In contrast, the Middle East area ranks last as shown in the table in the same period.
During the period from 1990 to 1995, the top ranked area, which is Europe, underwent a tremendous boom to 390.3 million visitors in 1995. Meanwhile, some regions such as America and Asia and the Pacific experienced moderate growth in the number of tourists, increasing by up to 30 million people compared to the previous years. In contrast, Africa and the Middle East regions experienced quite a modest increase, only about 1.5 to 2.6 million in 5 years.
Between 2000 and 2005, European areas witnessed a stability in the changes of tourist numbers. Its volume of international-travelling tourists increased by 2.9 to 7 million every five years with the statistics in 2005 doubling that of 1990. The figures in 2005 of Asia and the Pacific, Middle East and Africa showed an upward trend , over twice as many tourists as that of 1990 in Asia and the Pacific and Africa. Unlike other regions, America saw a slight decrease in the numbers, standing at 113.2 in with 5 million tourists fewer than in 2000. The total scale increased steadily with time, peaking at 693.7 million people in 2005.
Task 2
An increasing number of people choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve
their appearance. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you
think this is positive or negative development?
It is widely acknowledged that whether to undergo plastic surgery for better appearance or not is a heated debate. From my perspective,I wholeheartedly believe that this kind of operation delivers extensive drawbacks.
On the one hand, one of the most alarming aspects of the trend toward cosmetic surgery is the inherent risk it poses to individuals' health. Every year, numerous reports highlight failed surgeries that result in serious complications, including fatal outcomes and lifelong repercussions. These risks underscore the potential dangers of elective procedures that involve replacing body parts with artificial substances. The idea of replacing any body parts with artificial substances or chemical agents definitely involves aftereffects, to a greater or lesser extent. For example, rhinoplasty results in can lead to respiratory issues when the natural cartilages are removed to be replaced with a plastic or rubber one.Moreover, most of the current clinical centres offering services in plastic surgeries possess fraudulent permits or violate the laws in some ways, so it is open to doubt about the real reliability of their qualifications. The consequences of the surgeon's effects of surgery may not become apparent until later in life. However, when one gets older, abnormalities in facial expressions and musculature will get more apparent ,which is counterproductive to the primary wishes to enhance the outward appearances.Therefore,the potential dangers of surgery highlight a critical issue.
While the focus on outer beauty is prevalent, it is essential to recognize that a person's true identity lies in their inner qualities. However, the pervasive presence of surgically enhanced celebrities in the media often exacerbates this issue. This exposure creates an obsession with appearance, leading individuals to overlook their unique physical and mental attributes. Promoting the idea that a personshould be defined by their physical beauty is to promote a false set of values. The real value of a person is defined by their glowing characters, not by the superficial outer look.It is undeniable that everyone fancies being alluring and dazzling, but no one should gamble away their life, money and health on plastic surgery considering the risks it underlies. Instead, appropriate outfit, skin care, workout sessions and makeup looks transform people into glowing versions without posing hazards to their healthful conditions.
In conclusion , despite the constant advancement in cosmetic surgery in this age and age, it is crucial that people should prioritize their values first before deciding to undergo such a precarious process.
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