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Is my EPQ question too broad???

Hi,

My EPQ is titled “Is dementia care in the UK ethical?” but is this too broad?

If it is, is it a problem that could cost me marks or would I be fine?

I have already thought of my subtitles for the project and have done some preliminary research.

Thanks

Reply 1

FAR too broad!

What do you mean by 'dementia care'. Where, in what settings, by whom?
What do you mean by 'ethical'? How are you going to measure this. Etc etc.

Reply 2

How would i adapt it to make it more specific? Also is it bad to change your EPQ question after doing your record of initial ideas and candidate proposal?

Also, what happens if your EPQ question is too niche?

Thank You

Reply 3

Original post
by RibieKalathil
How would i adapt it to make it more specific? Also is it bad to change your EPQ question after doing your record of initial ideas and candidate proposal?
Also, what happens if your EPQ question is too niche?
Thank You


Hi I’m in the same boat mine is too broad but my record of initial ideas has already been submitted. I think (from the YouTube videos I’ve watched about EPQ) it’s fine to change your title it actually shows you’ve grown and adapted later on. Not 100% though so if anyone sees this please let us know :smile:?

Reply 4

Original post
by RibieKalathil
How would i adapt it to make it more specific? Also is it bad to change your EPQ question after doing your record of initial ideas and candidate proposal?
Also, what happens if your EPQ question is too niche?
Thank You

What are you driving at here - that more dementia patients shouldn't be treated ?
Are you actually asking about 'right to die'?
If you explain a bit more, I might be able tp help.

Reply 5

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by McGinger
What are you driving at here - that more dementia patients shouldn't be treated ?
Are you actually asking about 'right to die'?
If you explain a bit more, I might be able tp help.

Oh ye, sorry lol. I mean like discussing ethical issues in dementia care like abuse of dementia patients.
i think my question is not worded in a good way cos multiple ppl have told me the same thing.
(edited 1 year ago)

Reply 6

Original post
by RibieKalathil
Oh ye, sorry lol. I mean like discussing ethical issues in dementia care like abuse of dementia patients.
i think my question is not worded in a good way cos multiple ppl have told me the same thing.


I don’t know if this helps, but I recently read an article about the ethical dilemmas of putting people with dementia into care homes where they are separated from their loved ones. It also talked about the strain this can put on their husband/wife who is left at home alone, and become isolated, while balancing this against the stress that can result from having to care for someone with severe dementia at home.

It was in Health Affairs, Narrative Matters section and titled ‘A Family Disease: Witnessing Firsthand the Toll that Dementia Takes on Caregivers’ by Gary Epstein-Lubow. Be warned though that this is in the US I think.

(Sorry if this is irrelevant but your question just reminded me of it)

Reply 7

Original post
by RibieKalathil
Oh ye, sorry lol. I mean like discussing ethical issues in dementia care like abuse of dementia patients.
i think my question is not worded in a good way cos multiple ppl have told me the same thing.

How are you going to research this?

What evidence or resources do you have?

What are you trying to prove or show?

Original post
by RibieKalathil
Also is it bad to change your EPQ question after doing your record of initial ideas and candidate proposal?

Also, what happens if your EPQ question is too niche?

Thank You


Question can be updated. Justify it though, so it shows "review of scope" and "project management" skills. This should help you pick up marks, as nobody is expecting a perfect EPQ.

Niche can be good, but make sure you can explain it to the average person AND you have sufficient research for it.

Reply 9

Original post
by McGinger

How are you going to research this?

What evidence or resources do you have?

What are you trying to prove or show?


Hi,

I've updated my question to "To what extent does the care of late-stage dementia patients in the UK conform to ethical standard." Just want a second opinion.
Thanks

Reply 10

Original post
by RibieKalathil
Hi,
I've updated my question to "To what extent does the care of late-stage dementia patients in the UK conform to ethical standard." Just want a second opinion.
Thanks

Whose 'ethical standard' and how exactly are you going to measure this.

Reply 11

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by McGinger
Whose 'ethical standard' and how exactly are you going to measure this.

How about i say to what extent care of late stage dementia patients conforms to medical ethics (beneficence, non-maleficence, justice and autonomy). To measure it, would it be enough for me to argue to what extent the ethical issues in dementia care (which I am going to discuss against medical ethics principles) has an effect on how much care of dementia conforms to medical ethics?

Thanks

Reply 12

Original post
by RibieKalathil
How about i say to what extent care of late stage dementia patients conforms to medical ethics (beneficence, non-maleficence, justice and autonomy). To measure it, would it be enough for me to argue to what extent the ethical issues in dementia care (which I am going to discuss against medical ethics principles) has an effect on how much care of dementia conforms to medical ethics?
Thanks

You need to remember that this is essentially an extended-essay - not a PhD thesis.

This is an enormous topic, and for a manageable and do-able EPQ you need a very exact, and simple, question to answer, not something as nebulous as 'dementia care vs medical ethics'.

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