Where to find good personal statement examples?

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Is there any websites to find examples of good personal statements (for law)?

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Reply 1

DataVenia

Volunteer Team, Clearing and Applications Advisor

Original post

by Shadowplay27

Is there any websites to find examples of good personal statements (for law)?

Have you checked the law personal statements here on TSR?

Reply 2

OxfordBrookesRep

Official Rep

How to write a Killer Law Personal Statement (No Pun Intended)

Hi there!

I totally get why you’d want to see some examples of good personal statements for law—it’s always helpful to have an idea of what to aim for. But here's the thing: while looking at examples can give you some direction, it's way more important to focus on making your personal statement your own. After all, admissions teams want to know about you, not just what someone else has written before.

As an Oxford Brookes rep, I’ve seen tons of personal statements, and honestly, the best ones stand out because they’re super personal, reflect a genuine passion for law, and give a peek into who the applicant really is. So, here’s a quick rundown of what to do:

1. Start with WHY you want to study law
Don’t just say, “I want to become a lawyer”—that’s kind of obvious. Think about what sparked your interest. Was it a TV show? A real-life event? A debate? Be specific about why law excites you and what aspect of it you’re passionate about (also specify whether it’s criminal law, environmental law, or anything else).

2. Highlight skills and experiences that matter
Law isn’t just about being smart—it’s about being analytical, persuasive, and able to think on your feet. So, if you’ve been involved in any debating clubs, volunteer work, or just situations where you had to think critically or argue a point, mention them. Even if you’ve just been reading up on current legal issues or watching documentaries, those things show your dedication to learning about law outside the classroom.

3. Link your studies to law
Admissions want to see that you’ve got the right mindset for law. If you’re doing subjects like English, History, or even Psychology, explain how they’ve helped you develop the skills that are super useful in law (like analysis, research, and critical thinking).

4. Don’t be afraid to get personal
It might feel a bit awkward, but talk about your experiences that have shaped you. Whether it’s a specific event, your upbringing, or a challenge you’ve overcome—share why it’s led you to pursue law. The more real and you it sounds, the better.

5. Keep it short and sweet
You’ve got around 4,000 characters (about 47 lines) to work with, so don’t waste space with fluff. Be clear, concise, and avoid repeating things already in your CV or application. Keep it to the point and make every word count.

6. Avoid copying other people’s statements
I know it might seem tempting to look at other people’s statements for inspiration but trust me—you want yours to stand out as your story, not someone else’s. If you do read others’ statements, use them as a guide for structure, not for content.

7. Check out some good resources

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UCAS: They have some solid advice on personal statements.

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The Student Room: You’ll find tons of discussions and tips from other students applying for law.

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Oxford Brookes Website: If you’re considering applying here (which we’d love), we also have some personal statement tips tailored to our courses:

At the end of the day, just be you. Tell the admissions team why law matters to you, how you’ve prepared for the challenge, and what makes you a great fit for the course. No need for fancy templates—just focus on being genuine, and you’ll be golden.

Good luck with it! You’ve got this! 😊

All the best,
Nazifa

Reply 3

Lancaster Student Ambassador

Official Rep

Original post

by Shadowplay27

Is there any websites to find examples of good personal statements (for law)?

Hi @Shadowplay27
The UCAS website has some law personal statement advise which may be a good start. Law Personal Statement | What To Include | UCAS. Also, some law personal statement examples can be found here Law Personal Statement Examples | Uni Compare, for ideas on structure and what to include.
Hope this helps!
-Jasmine (Lancaster Student Ambassador)