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Need advice on evaluations in psychology A level aqa

When evaluating a theory in psychology do I have to talk about a different part of the theory in each one of my evaluative paragraphs? For exmaple for the MSM could I include HM (supporting the separation of STM and LTM) and Baddeley word list recall (also supporting the separation os STM and LTM) or would it be counted as one evaluation?
Original post by 🐼PANDA🐼
When evaluating a theory in psychology do I have to talk about a different part of the theory in each one of my evaluative paragraphs? For exmaple for the MSM could I include HM (supporting the separation of STM and LTM) and Baddeley word list recall (also supporting the separation os STM and LTM) or would it be counted as one evaluation?

I think they would be fine as two separate pieces of evaluation, however, I would recommend developing one with a methodological critique and/or an issue and debate to make your AO3 more detailed, as they are both research evidence.
Original post by lilith402
I think they would be fine as two separate pieces of evaluation, however, I would recommend developing one with a methodological critique and/or an issue and debate to make your AO3 more detailed, as they are both research evidence.

I see, it’s about showing multiple angles to make it clear you know what you’re talking about. Btw I’ve made some essay plans for MSM and it would be great if you could tell me if they would be good enough for say level 4:
Strength - Case Study Evidence (HM):

Point: One strength of the multi-store model is that case study evidence supports the model.

Evidence: For example, HM underwent surgery to remove his hippocampus due to epilepsy. Post-surgery, HM was unable to form new long-term memories but retained the ability to form new short-term memories.

Explain: This suggests that STM and LTM are located in distinct areas of the brain, as they were differently affected by the removal of the hippocampus. Additionally, the hippocampus's role in prolonged maintenance rehearsal and its removal resulting in an inability to form new long-term memories validate the MSM's claim of linear processing.

Link: This biological separation strongly supports the MSM's assertion that STM and LTM are structurally distinct, enhancing the model’s credibility. Furthermore, it highlights the model's strength in explaining memory processing in real-life neurological cases.

1.

Limitation - Case Study Evidence (KF):

2.

Point: A limitation of the multi-store model is that case study evidence contradicts the claim that short-term memory is a unitary store.

3.

Evidence: For example, KF, who had amnesia from a motorcycling accident, could recall only two items when presented with auditory information but could recall seven items when presented with visual information.

4.

Explain: This suggests that short-term memory is not a single store but consists of separate subsystems for different types of information, such as auditory and visual stimuli. This aligns more closely with models that incorporate subsystem distinctions, such as the working memory model.

5.

Link: Therefore, while KF's case challenges the MSM's unitary view of STM, it supports alternative frameworks, reducing the MSM's credibility. Despite this, it highlights the importance of evolving models based on nuanced findings.

6.

Limitation - Lack of Ecological Validity (Baddeley’s study on encoding):

7.

Point: A limitation of the multi-store model is that much of the supporting research, particularly laboratory experiments, suffers from a lack of ecological validity.

8.

Evidence: For instance, Baddeley’s study on encoding in STM and LTM involved participants recalling a list of meaningless words, which does not mirror real-life memory processes.

9.

Explain: The use of meaningless words lowers the mundane realism of the task because, in real life, memory typically involves meaningful and personally relevant information. While controlled experiments isolate variables effectively, they fail to replicate the complex, emotional nature of real-world memory use.

10.

Link: As a result, the lack of ecological validity in these studies raises questions about the MSM's applicability to everyday memory processes. This undermines its credibility as a comprehensive model while emphasizing the need for research that balances control with real-world relevance.

11.

Limitation - Alternative Models (Dual task studies):

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Point: A further limitation is that there are more accurate models of memory than the multi-store model.

13.

Evidence: For example, Baddeley and Hitch’s working memory model explains findings from dual-task studies. When participants perform tasks requiring use of both the 'visual-spatial sketchpad' and the 'phonological loop,' the central executive allocates tasks between these two subsystems, resulting in better performance compared to when a single store is used.

14.

Explain: In contrast, the multi-store model does not account for separate visual and auditory stores in short-term memory, as it views STM as a unitary store. This limitation prevents the MSM from explaining how tasks can be processed simultaneously without interference.

15.

Link: This suggests that the MSM is limited and oversimplified, whereas more comprehensive models, such as the working memory model, provide a more accurate and detailed understanding of memory processes.

Original post by 🐼PANDA🐼
I see, it’s about showing multiple angles to make it clear you know what you’re talking about. Btw I’ve made some essay plans for MSM and it would be great if you could tell me if they would be good enough for say level 4:
Strength - Case Study Evidence (HM):

Point: One strength of the multi-store model is that case study evidence supports the model.

Evidence: For example, HM underwent surgery to remove his hippocampus due to epilepsy. Post-surgery, HM was unable to form new long-term memories but retained the ability to form new short-term memories.

Explain: This suggests that STM and LTM are located in distinct areas of the brain, as they were differently affected by the removal of the hippocampus. Additionally, the hippocampus's role in prolonged maintenance rehearsal and its removal resulting in an inability to form new long-term memories validate the MSM's claim of linear processing.

Link: This biological separation strongly supports the MSM's assertion that STM and LTM are structurally distinct, enhancing the model’s credibility. Furthermore, it highlights the model's strength in explaining memory processing in real-life neurological cases.

1.

Limitation - Case Study Evidence (KF):

2.

Point: A limitation of the multi-store model is that case study evidence contradicts the claim that short-term memory is a unitary store.

3.

Evidence: For example, KF, who had amnesia from a motorcycling accident, could recall only two items when presented with auditory information but could recall seven items when presented with visual information.

4.

Explain: This suggests that short-term memory is not a single store but consists of separate subsystems for different types of information, such as auditory and visual stimuli. This aligns more closely with models that incorporate subsystem distinctions, such as the working memory model.

5.

Link: Therefore, while KF's case challenges the MSM's unitary view of STM, it supports alternative frameworks, reducing the MSM's credibility. Despite this, it highlights the importance of evolving models based on nuanced findings.

6.

Limitation - Lack of Ecological Validity (Baddeley’s study on encoding):

7.

Point: A limitation of the multi-store model is that much of the supporting research, particularly laboratory experiments, suffers from a lack of ecological validity.

8.

Evidence: For instance, Baddeley’s study on encoding in STM and LTM involved participants recalling a list of meaningless words, which does not mirror real-life memory processes.

9.

Explain: The use of meaningless words lowers the mundane realism of the task because, in real life, memory typically involves meaningful and personally relevant information. While controlled experiments isolate variables effectively, they fail to replicate the complex, emotional nature of real-world memory use.

10.

Link: As a result, the lack of ecological validity in these studies raises questions about the MSM's applicability to everyday memory processes. This undermines its credibility as a comprehensive model while emphasizing the need for research that balances control with real-world relevance.

11.

Limitation - Alternative Models (Dual task studies):

12.

Point: A further limitation is that there are more accurate models of memory than the multi-store model.

13.

Evidence: For example, Baddeley and Hitch’s working memory model explains findings from dual-task studies. When participants perform tasks requiring use of both the 'visual-spatial sketchpad' and the 'phonological loop,' the central executive allocates tasks between these two subsystems, resulting in better performance compared to when a single store is used.

14.

Explain: In contrast, the multi-store model does not account for separate visual and auditory stores in short-term memory, as it views STM as a unitary store. This limitation prevents the MSM from explaining how tasks can be processed simultaneously without interference.

15.

Link: This suggests that the MSM is limited and oversimplified, whereas more comprehensive models, such as the working memory model, provide a more accurate and detailed understanding of memory processes.


Yes, this is really good- you have a lot of detail, which is great! The only other thing I definitely recommend adding is an Issue and Debate, which, if you're in first year, you may not have done yet. Essentially, it is a key topic of debate and discussion in psychology that can be applied to the topic. This is necessary for all AO3 in any question that includes it, and you'll unfortunately be graded down if you don't have it.
For MSM specifically, I would recommend bringing in the debate of reductionism into your final point, especially experimental reductionism. This would link well, as experimental reductionism in this context would discuss how the MSM breaks memory into too simplistic parts, and that the examination of these simplified parts, although making for a useful model, cannot explain the function of the whole complex structure of memory.
Apart from this, what you've written is top band, I think :smile:

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