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Please could somebody check over my midwifery personal statement

Hi everyone, I realllyyyyyy want to go study Midwifery at uni in 2025 and I am struggling with my personal statement because none of my teachers really have the right idea of what makes a good midwifery personal statement so I'm just wondering if anyone on here could give it a read for me and help me to improve it? If you could reply to this and let me know if you can and then i can try sending you the link for what I have got so far.
Thank you!
There is a PS review service here on TSR. I would not recommend sharing it with a random person as you don’t know where it will end up.

https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/showthread.php?t=4237154
Original post by bnaylor72
Hi everyone, I realllyyyyyy want to go study Midwifery at uni in 2025 and I am struggling with my personal statement because none of my teachers really have the right idea of what makes a good midwifery personal statement so I'm just wondering if anyone on here could give it a read for me and help me to improve it? If you could reply to this and let me know if you can and then i can try sending you the link for what I have got so far.
Thank you!

Personally I wouldn't get anyone you don't know to go over something that is going to protentially get you into university for midwifery. Like the person said in reply 1 to you - you don't know where it will land up. A personal statement for midwifery or nursing degrees is meant to be personal to you only and not for anyone else to see it and potentially use it for there own. Not worth it.

Ask someone like a teacher to assist you with this.
If you can't get anyone to go over it with you then just submit it the best possible way and see what happens from there as remember that midwifery is one of the hardest degrees to get into because of the very limited places available for each university for this course.


Write your personal statement solely on midwifery and the reasons why you think you'll make a wonderful midwife.


A registered adult nurse.
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