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- You don’t see the police vans hunting us down, or the managers who treat us like we’re the lowest of the low. You're too busy bowing ... to your beloved England

- I don’t want to fight you, Mai. I’m grateful for the room

- She ain’t been right since you leave. She don’t clean, she don’t cook
Reply 1
rah do your own revision darling and there is something called VIDEOS and WEBSITES and REVISION GUIDES!!! thanks x
Reply 2
Original post by fatbum
rah do your own revision darling and there is something called VIDEOS and WEBSITES and REVISION GUIDES!!! thanks x


Thanks for what can’t tell me I don’t do my own revision when I do there’s basically nothing on leave taking
Original post by Nicolettata
- You don’t see the police vans hunting us down, or the managers who treat us like we’re the lowest of the low. You're too busy bowing ... to your beloved England
- I don’t want to fight you, Mai. I’m grateful for the room
- She ain’t been right since you leave. She don’t clean, she don’t cook

. "You don’t see the police vans hunting us down, or the managers who treat us like we’re the lowest of the low. You're too busy bowing ... to your beloved England"

Context: This quote highlights the speaker's frustration with someone who is oblivious to the struggles and injustices faced by others. It suggests a divide between those who are oppressed and those who are indifferent or complicit.

Techniques:

Contrast: The quote contrasts the harsh realities faced by the speaker ("police vans hunting us down" and "managers who treat us like we’re the lowest of the low") with the indifference of the person being addressed ("You're too busy bowing ... to your beloved England").

Imagery: Vivid imagery is used to depict the oppressive actions of the police and managers, creating a strong visual impact.

Irony: There is an element of irony in the phrase "your beloved England," suggesting that the person's loyalty to their country blinds them to its flaws and injustices.

"I don’t want to fight you, Mai. I’m grateful for the room"

Context: This quote reflects a moment of conflict resolution or an attempt to avoid confrontation. The speaker expresses gratitude and a desire for peace.

Techniques:

Direct Address: The use of the name "Mai" makes the statement personal and direct, emphasizing the speaker's sincerity.

Tone: The tone is conciliatory and appreciative, aiming to de-escalate any tension.

Simple Language: The straightforward language conveys honesty and a genuine desire to avoid conflict.

"She ain’t been right since you leave. She don’t clean, she don’t cook"

Context: This quote describes the negative impact of someone's departure on another person's behavior and well-being. It suggests a sense of loss and disruption.

Techniques:

Colloquial Language: The use of informal language ("ain’t," "don’t") adds authenticity and reflects the speaker's background or social context.

Repetition: The repetition of "she don’t" emphasizes the extent of the change in behavior and the impact of the departure.

Characterization: The quote provides insight into the character who has been affected, highlighting their dependence on the person who left.

Reply 4
Original post by Nicolettata
Thanks for what can’t tell me I don’t do my own revision when I do there’s basically nothing on leave taking

sorry if i may have come across as aggressive ☹️. maybe using chat gpt can help you! it sometimes has really good and valid points furthermore, possibly asking teachers or just looking at examples of tecniques can really help. sorry for how i first came across x 🙂

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