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A Level English Literature Essay help

Hi, I'm in Y13, I study the A spec, Othello, Gatsby and pre-1900s poetry, and I do paper 2B modern times, post 1945, Handmaid's, Feminine Gospels and Streetcar.
The way I'm currently writing is at the Top of Band 4. From what I gather my essay are usually lacking in terminology and sometimes context (that one is much less frequent).
My question is, does anyone have any advice how I could improve my essay writing, like how I could bring in terminology so that it sounds more organic, not like it is shoehorned in?
Also, any other general tips to improve essays? Sounding more assertive in my essays has helped me move up to an average of 21/25 in my responses. I am predicted an A* and really want to get that, but that means getting an average of 22/25 on each essay if last year's grade boundaries are anything to go by.

Thank you!

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Original post by Gabi26
Hi, I'm in Y13, I study the A spec, Othello, Gatsby and pre-1900s poetry, and I do paper 2B modern times, post 1945, Handmaid's, Feminine Gospels and Streetcar.
The way I'm currently writing is at the Top of Band 4. From what I gather my essay are usually lacking in terminology and sometimes context (that one is much less frequent).
My question is, does anyone have any advice how I could improve my essay writing, like how I could bring in terminology so that it sounds more organic, not like it is shoehorned in?
Also, any other general tips to improve essays? Sounding more assertive in my essays has helped me move up to an average of 21/25 in my responses. I am predicted an A* and really want to get that, but that means getting an average of 22/25 on each essay if last year's grade boundaries are anything to go by.
Thank you!

Hi, I think by 'terminology' it means the way your writing the essay, I would read a lot of scholars articles on the text and try learn how they write, what kind of words their using

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Original post by Jakeclarke
Hi, I think by 'terminology' it means the way your writing the essay, I would read a lot of scholars articles on the text and try learn how they write, what kind of words their using


Anything particular that I could look out for that looks like terminology? I know it seems odd that I'm getting high Band 4, but what I know of terminology is limited, I literally found out 'allusion' is a device last week. I have two teachers, yet somehow only one refers to my terminology as a bit of an issue while the other one thinks it's fine. Though one does teach me Othello and Gatsby and her issue usually is that when I talk about Othello my terminology is scarce and I don't always talk about stage craft. Sorry this is so long. My brain is trying to find a formula of sorts to follow so that I can improve, that might not be the best way to sound organic in the essays though😅.

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Original post by Gabi26
Anything particular that I could look out for that looks like terminology? I know it seems odd that I'm getting high Band 4, but what I know of terminology is limited, I literally found out 'allusion' is a device last week. I have two teachers, yet somehow only one refers to my terminology as a bit of an issue while the other one thinks it's fine. Though one does teach me Othello and Gatsby and her issue usually is that when I talk about Othello my terminology is scarce and I don't always talk about stage craft. Sorry this is so long. My brain is trying to find a formula of sorts to follow so that I can improve, that might not be the best way to sound organic in the essays though😅.

I use/ would recommend using Chatgpt for this. Before I was trying to find articles to make my writing better on JSTOR etc and it was taking me very long and wasted a lot of my time, AI is very precise and helpful. I send my essays or paragraphs to Chatgpt then say something like 'recommend me how to boost terminology and language to make it as academic as possible' . After doing this like 10 times, then just ask AI based on everything give me a list of terminology, that is used in nearly all my writing/ so that you can memorise it all.

Only use AI if you feel comfortable using it, if you dont want to use AI then JSTOR is your best bet, write down e.g. 'Othello articles' you'll find 100s, some will be good/some not relevant, it will take long though to find the right ones.

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