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Embedding your quotes. For example, instead of saying "Othello is jealous, and this is shown when he says 'Jealousy is a green eyed monster'", say "Othello describes his jealousy as a 'green eyed monster'". The second sentence flows a lot better, making your essay more 'flowy'.
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Linking your quotes back to the context of the time. For example, "Othello describes his jealousy as a 'green eyed monster'". What was mythology like when Shakespeare was writing this play? How does this show the gravity of his jealousy?
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Using critics. For example, Roland Barthes' 'death of the author' is a literary essay that essentially says that there is no link between the author and the text, implying that it is impossible to understand an author's intentions, there can be no single correct interpretation of the meaning of a particular text (this is from what I remember - please double check this!). This gives you access to those higher marks, as you are going beyond a standard analysis and critically evaluating the text.
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Use the PETACL. Point, Evidence, Technique, Analysis, Context/Critic, Link
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