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THis is the start of a Macbeth essay I startd writing on the supernatural and please tell me if this is on the grade 8/ 9 level that I am aiming for.
In the play “Macbeth”, Shakespeare makes the supernatural a central theme and his depiction of the supernatural aligns with Jacobean paradigms as he presents the witches in this play as a deeply corrupting force and warns against their influence. He does this through his portrayal of Macbeth as a tragic hero whose character experiences a vertiginous downfall after his interaction with the supernatural who act as a catalyst for his insatiable ambition.
Right at the beginning of this play, Shakespeare immediately introduces us to the heinous nature of the witches as they chant “fair is foul and foul is fair”. Here, an oxymoron is used by the witches which is extremely paradoxical and confusing demonstrating how these witches are evil creatures who wish to cause doom and disruption to natural order. They also speak in trochaic tetrameter which is distinct from the iambic pentameter that the rest of the characters in this play speak in and the contrast shows their otherworldliness and portrays them to be wicked agents of chaos who operate outside the norms of reality. The unnatural pattern of speech could also further symbolise the disruption they bring to natural order. This links to how in the Jacobean era, many people believed in the Great Chain of Being which is the idea that God created the world with a clear hierarchal structure and order that encompasses all of life. Here, the witches can be seen seemingly challenging this structure and therefore also challenging God. SO here, Shakespeare develops the image of them being like agents of the devil who go against God and therefore this would repulse his highly religious audience.
Additionally, the witches are also shown to be malevolent characters by Shakespeare as he shows how they spark wicked thoughts in Macbeth about killing Duncan and trigger his fatal flaw which is his ambition. In one of Macbeth’s soliloquies, he acknowledges that he has a “vaulting ambition which overleaps itself”. The personification of his ambition evokes imagery of it being like a barbaric animal and the adjective “vaulting” also further implies uncontrollability suggesting that this ambition is now plaguing Macbeth’s mind and that he is completely powerless against it. The verb “overleaps” also showcases how it leads him to think and act illogically emphasising its destructive nature. Here specifically, his ambition leads him into thoughts about committing regicide which would have been extremely shocking to a Jacobean audience as they believed in the Divine Right of Kings which is the belief that the King is divinely ordained so killing the King is a direct act of defiance against God and extremely sinful. Shakespeare demonstrates this initial moral corruption of Macbeth as he is led away from God to be synonymous with the witches as it happens right after he meets them. Therefore, Shakespeare signals to the audience the extremely corrupting nature of the supernatural who can make even “noble” and “brave” men such as Macbeth descend into sin.

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