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ALEVEL Edexcel History coursework

I'm doing the question about the significance of German imperial ambitions on the origins of the First World War. I'm confused on how to do one of my sections, 'Other Historians'. I'm not sure if everyone else has a different structure to mine, but this is the way we've been told to do ours: Introduction, 3 main body paras each on different historians, another body paragraph on 'Other Historians', conclusion.

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by kiragd
I'm doing the question about the significance of German imperial ambitions on the origins of the First World War. I'm confused on how to do one of my sections, 'Other Historians'. I'm not sure if everyone else has a different structure to mine, but this is the way we've been told to do ours: Introduction, 3 main body paras each on different historians, another body paragraph on 'Other Historians', conclusion.

Hi I do Edexcel history and am in year 13, I found doing theme by theme really useful. For context i did the nature of Napoleon's domestic rule. I chose 3 themes in relation to the question (The church, the military and egalite) and i did 4 sub paragraphs, 1 for each of my 3 historians and a mini judgement for each section to evaluate who was the most convincing. With the other historians, I referenced other sources to either disprove or support my 3 main historians within their particular paragraph. Hope this is helpful!

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I found categorising the paras into themes useful too, as in different factors that contributing to WWI for each para. I was really confused on the difference between 'main historians' and 'other historians', so thank you!

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by kiragd
I found categorising the paras into themes useful too, as in different factors that contributing to WWI for each para. I was really confused on the difference between 'main historians' and 'other historians', so thank you!

No worries!

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