Peace stands for Point, evidence, analysis, counter analysis, evaluation.
To what extent has the un been A greater factor promoting growth and stability in developing countries than TNCs?
Point: make an evaluative point e.g.
to a large/small/moderate extent TNCs have been the largest contrbuter to growth in developing countries.
Evidence: bring in Evidence to support the point you have made e.g.
Apple Inc's investment into China has pioneered the growth of shenzen from a Small fishing village into a large industrial city. (It would be good to put statistic here as well)
Analysis: analyse your evidence.
People can find better wages and an overall improvement in their quality of life than in rural areas. (Is suggest finding a way to talk about feedback loops, they seem to love that. More people coming into the city>more government investment into the city >better quality of life>pull factor for others leading to rural to urban migration. Positive feedback)
Counter analysis: find something that completely or somewhat goes against the point you're making (examiners seem to love this too).
Although tnc investment has significantly developed cities within China and other developing nations, it causes more funding by the Government to be allocated in cities and less to be allocated in rural areas , increasing inequality And therefore social and economic instability within the country.
Evaluation: make an evaluative conclusive sentence.
Therefore, to a large extent, TNC's promote sihnificant growth in a country but in the case of stability, other factors contribute more.
Then the next paragraphs would be about how I think the un promotes stability more than TNCs and then another paragraph on either one.
When a question has two nouns such as growth and stability, I wouldn't group them together but rather talk about them individually as it makes it easier to write more and gives you an easier time counter analysing.
To remember statistics , I was quite good at it anyway as quite enjoyed it, but to remember more I started with like 15 flashcards and until I knew all of them by heart I did not add more. Also doing essay plans like I have just done really helps you remember certain statistics better.