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Any predications for the Higher English poetry this year (MacCaig)??

Reply 1

Basking Shark. I'm not thrilled but I've come to terms with it now. If it's not that then I reckon it'll be Assisi. Anything else would surprise me.

Reply 2

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by OnlySmartOneHere
Basking Shark. I'm not thrilled but I've come to terms with it now. If it's not that then I reckon it'll be Assisi. Anything else would surprise me.

i will cry tears of joy if it’s Basking Shark.

Reply 3

What do you think the ruae is gonna be. And is there no chance of hotel room?

Reply 4

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by Rtg198
What do you think the ruae is gonna be. And is there no chance of hotel room?

Hmm, i wouldn’t say no chance because it hasn’t actually been used in a ‘proper’ exam (it was last seen in the 2021 assessment paper) but it also isn’t being removed so it’s possible that the SQA would want to test a poem that is being removed and leave HR12F for another year

Reply 5

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by Becca2008
Hmm, i wouldn’t say no chance because it hasn’t actually been used in a ‘proper’ exam (it was last seen in the 2021 assessment paper) but it also isn’t being removed so it’s possible that the SQA would want to test a poem that is being removed and leave HR12F for another year
Here’s my personal opinion of the poems in order of likeliness that it’ll come up on the exam:
Assisi
Basking Shark
HR12F
Aunt Julia
Brooklyn Cop
Visiting Hour

Reply 6

Is Assisi being removed? I’m so screwed if it comes up as I know it worst

Reply 7

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by Rtg198
Is Assisi being removed? I’m so screwed if it comes up as I know it worst

Assisi is being removed

Reply 8

Welp I’m done for. What do you think the commonality will be. And what are you doing for your essay?

Reply 9

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by Rtg198
Welp I’m done for. What do you think the commonality will be. And what are you doing for your essay?

Honestly, the commonality could be anything. It's ranged from "the passage of time" to "human indifference and cruelty" to even "the use of contrast" before so it's almost impossible to guess. I would say to make sure that you know all of the central concerns of the poems and have them absolutely nailed because then you can pick almost any quote from any of the poems and link it back to the question. I think, genuinely, in English, almost anything you put is correct as long as you know enough about your poems that you can absolutely justify why you used it and link it back to the question.

If it's Assisi then I think the best 10 marker they could give is would be about power, cruelty, inequality, or indifference because then you could use "outside three tiers of churches" and there's enough within that one quote to analyse for 2 marks. You could then link it to Brooklyn Cop ("should the tissue tear, should he plunge into violence" or "who would be him, gorilla with a nightstick.") and Hotel Room, 12th Floor ("the harsh screaming from coldwater flats, the blood glazed" or "The frontier is never somewhere else.")

Basking Shark's dream 10 marker would probably be on truth, human experiences, reflection, or revelation because you could use the obvious "so who's the monster? The thought made me grow pale." Then you can link it to Visiting Hour ("I will not feel, I will not / feel, until / I have to") for the human experience of avoiding death and also HR12F ("But Midnight is not so easily defeated" and "The frontier is never somewhere else") because they reflect on the revelation that humans have an innate sense of darkness and a primal instinct for violence.

Apart from that, I'd say the next best 10 marker would have to be on loss (Aunt Julia- the loss of Scottish traditional culture, the loss of Aunt Julia. Visting Hour- the loss of the loved one in hospital) or suffering (of literally everyone (except the church in Assisi) in every single poem).

Try to make a bank of potential 10 markers and find out what questions come up over and over again. Then you can start finding quotes and try to see which quotes you keep coming back to. Remember to revise techniques and characters and themes and you'll be fine!

I'm doing The Yellow Wallpaper by Charlotte Perkins Gilman for my CE!

Reply 10

Ok wow, you’re getting an A1 this year. Really great tips thanks. Also what do you think the likelihood of a key incident question coming up for prose fiction is? I know it came up the last 2 years but if it comes up this year I will start crying happy tears during that exam.

Reply 11

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by Rtg198
Ok wow, you’re getting an A1 this year. Really great tips thanks. Also what do you think the likelihood of a key incident question coming up for prose fiction is? I know it came up the last 2 years but if it comes up this year I will start crying happy tears during that exam.

Ahhh thank you! I'm definitely aiming for at least an A for this exam.

Obviously you can't exactly predict what the question will be exactly but you can look at the types of questions that regularly come up. You're going to need to forgive me for the nerdy rant but I do think it's important to understand the type of essays that can come up before making predictions. I'm focusing specifically on questions that relate to the novella that I'm doing (The Yellow Wallpaper) so forgive me if I miss any out but I think I should roughly cover them all.

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Theme Essay: This can be generic such as a “moral, social, or political theme” but it can also be extremely specific such as the “theme of isolation, love, or conflict”. You need to understand which specific themes relate to their generic one. For example, I could write an essay on the theme of isolation and argue that it is a moral theme because isolating someone is a morally dubious act.


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Key Incident: This could also be known as a “powerful ending” question if your key incident happens at the end of the story because it conveys the key theme of the story. It should be chronological order from the very start to the key incident (or the end depending on the structure of your novella).


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Setting: This one is relatively self-explanatory and would require you to talk about the different aspects of when (timing is an example of setting!) and where the story is set.


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Character Essay: You need to be careful about this one as it’s easy to see a character essay and immediately pick it. Have a think before you start writing about if it actually relates to your character. for example, I would not be able to write an essay on a character who is responsible for her own suffering because the whole point of The Yellow Wallpaper is that women are oppressed and the narrator herself is continually ignored regarding her mental health needs.

Also, regarding the character essay, if you feel confident doing this and it RELATES TO YOUR TEXT then you could potentially use a “character who you feel sympathy for” question to write about a key incident. You would just have to specificy why the key incident makes the readers feel sympathy for the character (ie why the incident happened and the impact is has on the character).

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A Random: The SQA loves to sneak in random little essay questions that do not fit neatly into any of the above. I think the thing you definitely need to do if you encounter this is imagine that there is someone at the SQA who is writing these questions with your book specifically in mind. You need to know your text inside out to know if this random wildcard essay is perfect for you or if it does not relate at all.

An example of a random essay might include “a pessimistic message”


I also think an important point to make is that the points you are making about the story will always remain the same. You will always refer to the key message within the story and what it means.

I think that a character essay is very likely this year, because even though it came up last year it was very specific so it might be more general this year (such as a simple sympathy question). I would definitely imagine a random essay this year because the SQA has used quite a lot of the generic essay questions quite recently so this might keep it fresh. Lastly, I would maybe predict a setting question because even though it was used in 2023, it hasn’t came up a lot before.

And, if you’re still reading this, thank you very much! I know that this is quite a lengthy message but, for me, it helps to write all of this out.

Reply 12

Nerdy rant doesn’t need to be forgiven, it’s APPRECIATED. I’m reallllllly hoping for a key incident essay as I’m doing The Kite Runner so a key incident will tie in perfectly, and the essay I gave to my teacher got a pretty decent score. Theme and character I’m also decent at and usually one of them comes up. I don’t know much about the yellow wallpaper so I don’t know what questions would tie in well for that one, if it key incident works well for that then keep in mind if they ask a question about loss that could basically be key incident too. For example in the kite runner the key incident is a boy getting raped, so the key incident leads to loss of innocence, loss of peace of mind due to guilt, loss of happiness loss of self confidence etc. Also for setting would you say it’s worth trying it out, I’ve never done a setting question before but an advantage is that you can just regurgitate the exact same essay as a setting question can’t really vary. Even my teacher said setting is really influential in the kite runner but I had no idea where to start and all my friends teachers said setting is the question you never try. If you’re read all that then thanks for listening to my nerdy rant.

Reply 13

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by Rtg198
Nerdy rant doesn’t need to be forgiven, it’s APPRECIATED. I’m reallllllly hoping for a key incident essay as I’m doing The Kite Runner so a key incident will tie in perfectly, and the essay I gave to my teacher got a pretty decent score. Theme and character I’m also decent at and usually one of them comes up. I don’t know much about the yellow wallpaper so I don’t know what questions would tie in well for that one, if it key incident works well for that then keep in mind if they ask a question about loss that could basically be key incident too. For example in the kite runner the key incident is a boy getting raped, so the key incident leads to loss of innocence, loss of peace of mind due to guilt, loss of happiness loss of self confidence etc. Also for setting would you say it’s worth trying it out, I’ve never done a setting question before but an advantage is that you can just regurgitate the exact same essay as a setting question can’t really vary. Even my teacher said setting is really influential in the kite runner but I had no idea where to start and all my friends teachers said setting is the question you never try. If you’re read all that then thanks for listening to my nerdy rant.

That key incident would also tie in perfectly with a character essay (maybe exploring the guilt that he feels or the sympathy the reader feels after he went through such a traumatic experience). I'm not entirely sure if this would fit as well because I haven't read the novel but it might also be worth looking at the question of a "character with strong and weak traits"? It might be quite a good one to have a think about, especially if you're dealing with the key incident and it includes multiple characters.

For me, I find it helpful to break the setting down into smaller stages.
Firstly, I think it's important that you introduce the wider, more impersonal setting (such as the house in TYW). It just sets the scene and ensures that the marker knows exactly what is happening and where it occurs. You can also use it to explore about the key messages or themes of the novel such as control, conflict, isolation, freedom etc etc.
Then, I would say get narrow the focus to a more specific area that the mc interacts with on a regular basis or is significant to the story. For me, that would be the room in which the narrator is isolated in. You can analyse this further and discuss the impact this would have on their psyche and body, especially the struggles they may within that specific environment.
Lastly, I would then pick a certain object which is found within the setting (like the wallpaper). It could be somethign symbolic or emotionally significant, idk if I'm on the right track but maybe something about the kite itself? This allows you to explore how setting and theme are deeply connected.
You might also find it a good idea to talk about the time period or era in which the story is set as this often influences the setting's meaning and the character's experiences and its implications within the story. This is especially relevant if you are exploring social or historical issues!

Reply 14

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by Becca2008
Ahhh thank you! I'm definitely aiming for at least an A for this exam.
Obviously you can't exactly predict what the question will be exactly but you can look at the types of questions that regularly come up. You're going to need to forgive me for the nerdy rant but I do think it's important to understand the type of essays that can come up before making predictions. I'm focusing specifically on questions that relate to the novella that I'm doing (The Yellow Wallpaper) so forgive me if I miss any out but I think I should roughly cover them all.

1.

Theme Essay: This can be generic such as a “moral, social, or political theme” but it can also be extremely specific such as the “theme of isolation, love, or conflict”. You need to understand which specific themes relate to their generic one. For example, I could write an essay on the theme of isolation and argue that it is a moral theme because isolating someone is a morally dubious act.


1.

Key Incident: This could also be known as a “powerful ending” question if your key incident happens at the end of the story because it conveys the key theme of the story. It should be chronological order from the very start to the key incident (or the end depending on the structure of your novella).


1.

Setting: This one is relatively self-explanatory and would require you to talk about the different aspects of when (timing is an example of setting!) and where the story is set.


1.

Character Essay: You need to be careful about this one as it’s easy to see a character essay and immediately pick it. Have a think before you start writing about if it actually relates to your character. for example, I would not be able to write an essay on a character who is responsible for her own suffering because the whole point of The Yellow Wallpaper is that women are oppressed and the narrator herself is continually ignored regarding her mental health needs.

Also, regarding the character essay, if you feel confident doing this and it RELATES TO YOUR TEXT then you could potentially use a “character who you feel sympathy for” question to write about a key incident. You would just have to specificy why the key incident makes the readers feel sympathy for the character (ie why the incident happened and the impact is has on the character).

1.

A Random: The SQA loves to sneak in random little essay questions that do not fit neatly into any of the above. I think the thing you definitely need to do if you encounter this is imagine that there is someone at the SQA who is writing these questions with your book specifically in mind. You need to know your text inside out to know if this random wildcard essay is perfect for you or if it does not relate at all.

An example of a random essay might include “a pessimistic message”


I also think an important point to make is that the points you are making about the story will always remain the same. You will always refer to the key message within the story and what it means.
I think that a character essay is very likely this year, because even though it came up last year it was very specific so it might be more general this year (such as a simple sympathy question). I would definitely imagine a random essay this year because the SQA has used quite a lot of the generic essay questions quite recently so this might keep it fresh. Lastly, I would maybe predict a setting question because even though it was used in 2023, it hasn’t came up a lot before.
And, if you’re still reading this, thank you very much! I know that this is quite a lengthy message but, for me, it helps to write all of this out.

Hi, first of all, you seem to really know what you are doing and the things you have said are scarily similar to what my English teacher ( who is an sqa marker) has said. Do you think there is any chance of an ending question coming up for prose fiction, and in the poetry section, do you not think Hotel Room 12th Floor is the most likely to come up as it has never came up before? thanks

Reply 15

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by bob4535
Hi, first of all, you seem to really know what you are doing and the things you have said are scarily similar to what my English teacher ( who is an sqa marker) has said. Do you think there is any chance of an ending question coming up for prose fiction, and in the poetry section, do you not think Hotel Room 12th Floor is the most likely to come up as it has never came up before? thanks

It's certainly reassuring to know that an SQA marker is thinking along similar lines!

I think that an ending question has recently came up in 2022 and, at its heart, it really is a key incident question which has been used quite a lot, so I wouldn't definitively discount it but it may be unlikely.

Hotel Room, 12th Floor was used in the 2021 assessment paper but technically that wasn't a proper exam so I would say it is definitely possible. However, it is one of the poems which are being kept on by the SQA so it is highly likely that they may choose to ask questions on a poem that is being removed from the set text list and keep HR12F for one of the later years.

However, if it was asked, I suppose there is a finite number of questions they could talk about. At its core, HR12F is about humanity's innate darkness and primitive nature despite our technological advancements. Our lack of civility will always prevail, regardless of how hard we try to hide it.

The first verse focuses mostly on the atmosphere of the city and the shifting tone. Therefore, you can only really ask questions relating to the imagery used and how it highlights an uneasy/tense mood or about the contrast between day/night to show the more threatening nature of the poem.

The second verse is focusing on the violence that occurs within the city. A question may ask you how MacCaig creates a sense of violence/threat/chaos/anxiety. It could also ask how MacCaig conveys a critical view of urban life and of humanity.

The last verse is all about the incivility of humanity and how it will always be prevalent, regardless of our "modernity". It could ask you about how this reinforces the central theme or how the poem has a pessimistic conclusion (that humanity will always be primitive) or how human conflict is unavoidable.

One of the best 10 marker questions you could have for this would be on suffering/death/loss/human fragility because you could talk about the violence we hold that make us all suffer inadvertantly due to our instincts.

You could link this to Assisi where the dwarf suffers due to being ignored by the church ("outside three tiers of churches”) or even suffers due to his physical deformities (“slumped like a half filled sack”)

This links to Aunt Julia because obviously there is a loss of Scottish traditional culture which is slowly being eradicated (“I could not answer her, I could not understand her”) and a death/loss of Aunt Julia herself (“silenced in the absolute black of a sandy grave”)

This also links to Basking Shark because there is a loss of human superiority and the narrator suffers from that realisation (“so who’s the monster? the thought made me grow pale”)

Brooklyn Cop is self-explanatory because again, the whole poem is about suffering and the darker side of humanity that we try to hide but usually wins. You can talk about the suffering of the cop as he struggles to leave his home, knowing that he could leave his wife a widow (“he hoped it, he truly hoped it”) and also the physical suffering he experiences when he is suddenly forced into violence (“should the tissue tear, should he plunge”).

And, lastly, there is Visiting Hour which you can obviously talk about the death of the speaker’s loved one and the suffering the speaker goes through as he tries to maintain his composure despite knowing this is an inevitability (“I will not feel, I will not / feel, until / I have to”)

Another 10 marker question you could have for this poem would either be power/cruelty of humans - linking to Assisi where humans display cruelty to the beggar by ignoring him and his needs - Brooklyn Cop where the cop is faced with violence every time he engages in his duties.

You could also have a 10 marker which focuses on humanity/revelations/reflection in which you could talk about the fact that our evil side will never really vanish. That would link up quite nicely with the revelation in Basking Shark where the speaker discovers the myth of human superiority. In Aunt Julia where the speaker reflects on the loss of Scottish culture through the symbolism of his Aunt. It could also work in Visiting Hour if you link the humanity reflections bit to the point where the speaker spends a significant portion of the poem attempting not to reflect or dwell on the thought of his loved on dying until near the end (“I have to”) which demonstrates his ineviatble falling to grief.

Reply 16

do you think i will be okay essay-wise if i prepare a setting essay and an ending essay, because it is impossible to plan a character essay because they are so specific

Reply 17

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by bob4535
do you think i will be okay essay-wise if i prepare a setting essay and an ending essay, because it is impossible to plan a character essay because they are so specific

Yeah, I would say you should be. However, I would recommend having a ready made paragraph or even just few quotes for a character that you can quickly refer back to if needed. It's always better to be over-prepared than under!

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