aqa a level biology essay

hello, im aiming for top band in my essay- i know to get above 23 marks you need out of spec knowledge and to be honest im not gonna really bother aiming that high as theres already so much i need to learn. I'm aiming for at least 18/25. Does someone have any specificc tips on how to achieve these marks? I would greatly appreciate someone attaching an example essay they wrote which scored highly if they are happy to

hello, im aiming for top band in my essay- i know to get above 23 marks you need out of spec knowledge and to be honest im not gonna really bother aiming that high as theres already so much i need to learn. I'm aiming for at least 18/25. Does someone have any specificc tips on how to achieve these marks? I would greatly appreciate someone attaching an example essay they wrote which scored highly if they are happy to

Hello, have you seen Ms Estruch Biology's videos on the essay? She has quite a few and I found them useful on how to write the essay
Her videos explain in more detail, but key points to writing the essay are: make sure you use correct A-Level content, make sure your points are from different parts of the specification (4-5 points should be enough) and make sure you link to importance (which is explained at A-Level standard).
Hope this helps!

That sounds super helpful- does she have any videos where she goes through an example essay that scores highly? I think I learn best when I see a good example.

Hello, I found this video where she goes through 3 example essays (top, middle and lower band): A Level Biology ESSAY - Marking your essays. Top, middle and lower scoring essay marked for you.
Hope this helps