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Worried about second year of uni

I'm a first year Geography student at Uni of Sheffield and I've been getting my results back for my semester 2 assignments and they're not as good as I hoped they would be.
This is making me really think if an essay based degree is for me and making me a little worried about year 2.

Was wondering if anyone had any advice in general or any for essay writing??

Would be much appreciated
Thank you!!

Reply 1

Does your uni have Royal Literary Fund fellows? If so, and if you haven't used them already, they're there to help with writing and give advice. So, yeah, it could be a shout to chat with them and have meetings about each essay next year - if the support is there, use it!

Edit to add: https://www.rlf.org.uk/institution/university-of-sheffield/

Reply 2

Original post
by chisa
I'm a first year Geography student at Uni of Sheffield and I've been getting my results back for my semester 2 assignments and they're not as good as I hoped they would be.
This is making me really think if an essay based degree is for me and making me a little worried about year 2.
Was wondering if anyone had any advice in general or any for essay writing??
Would be much appreciated
Thank you!!

Hi there,

Its perfectly normal for people once they've started uni to not get as good a grades as they're used to at school - this is a reflection A) of you coming to a place where everyone is of a similar calibre to you, and B) you getting used to this new way of writing and doing assignments.

Your academic advisor/personal tutor would be a really good person to talk to about this because they will be able to point you in the right direction for support within your uni for writing essays.

My general tips would be to...

1.

Use simple English and avoid unecessary complex words or sentence structures - at uni I was always advised to write for an intelligent 14 year old

2.

Have a clear structure: beginning (intro of main arguments, what you'll discuss and your thesis statement), middle (your arguments one by one which flow into each other), and end (summary of arguments and what based on the evidence you believe - remember to leave it open to further research is needed!)

3.

Keep to the word count - but remember its easier to cut down words than have to fill them in

4.

Use Google Scholar's date filtering tool to get up to date articles e.g from the past 3 years

5.

Keep a bibliography as you go along and don't be afraid to take references from your references!


I hope this helps and best of luck - just keep your head up, your grades are not a reflection of where you'll be by the end of your third year, they are just a reflection of you now when you are just learning this new way of working.

University of Bath

Reply 3

Original post
by chisa
I'm a first year Geography student at Uni of Sheffield and I've been getting my results back for my semester 2 assignments and they're not as good as I hoped they would be.
This is making me really think if an essay based degree is for me and making me a little worried about year 2.
Was wondering if anyone had any advice in general or any for essay writing??
Would be much appreciated
Thank you!!

Hey @chisa! Completely get where you're coming from, it's such a big jump from school/college to university level essay writing and lots struggle with that in first year.

It might help to remember first year is all about figuring out what works for you. Even if your marks aren't quite where you want them to be, they're a starting point!

A few tips that helped me:

break down the question before you do anything else - underline key terms, what is it really asking

plan out your argument in advance so your essay has a clear line of thought

use feedback from past assignments - it can feel a bit harsh but it's genuinely helpful once you know what to look out for

use strong sources - academic books/journals carry more weight than websites for example. shows that you've done your reading and understood the debate.

proofread - this makes a bigger difference than people think! read it out loud to catch awkward phrasing.

check if your uni offers study skills or academic writing workshops - they're usually free and super helpful


remember that year 1 is often weighed less heavily or not at all in your final grade - its a foundation year to help you find your feet. Hope this helps enough!

Innaya,
MMU Student Rep x

Reply 4

Original post
by chisa
I'm a first year Geography student at Uni of Sheffield and I've been getting my results back for my semester 2 assignments and they're not as good as I hoped they would be.
This is making me really think if an essay based degree is for me and making me a little worried about year 2.
Was wondering if anyone had any advice in general or any for essay writing??
Would be much appreciated
Thank you!!

Hi there,

Writing essays at university for the first time can be really hard so I thought I would add some of my tips for assignment writing to see if any help you out a bit:

Firstly, I would say to try and start your assignments as soon as possible. I know this sounds easier said than done and sounds obvious, but it really does help so you get time to make corrections and ask your tutors about anything they can help you with.

Similarly, make sure you make use of your tutors! If you get any opportunities for feedback, take them or just ask them for help! They may be able to look over some of your work, or they might just help you with little bits but make sure you ask if you have anything you need help as that's what they are there for!


In terms of writing the actual work, I would say to just read over the brief lots as you are working. Any time you finish a paragraph, check it with the marking criteria. You could also print off the marking rubric and check what you have written with it and highlight what you think you have done so you can try and get as much of it done as you can.


Making sure you are critical is important too. This can be tricky but once you get it it does get easier. Just make sure you are counter arguing your points (if you need to of course!) so you can get the critical argument in rather than it being descriptive.


Referencing is key too! Make sure you are referencing your points - don't say something as if it is a fact without evidence and make sure you back up your points. You can use google scholar or other journals or similar and use your lecture notes too, as well as the recommended reading!


Make use of the services at your uni too. Often the library will put on sessions so you can learn things like critical writing, referencing, assignment structure etc! These are so helpful and will really help you.


Also just making sure the structure is correct is important too. Referencing correctly is really important - make sure it is the correct format and in the right order in the reference list (usually alphabetical but can differ depending on the referring style)



I hope some of this helps!

Lucy -SHU student ambassador.

Reply 5

Original post
by chisa
I'm a first year Geography student at Uni of Sheffield and I've been getting my results back for my semester 2 assignments and they're not as good as I hoped they would be.
This is making me really think if an essay based degree is for me and making me a little worried about year 2.
Was wondering if anyone had any advice in general or any for essay writing??
Would be much appreciated
Thank you!!

Hiya,

I understand that this would be a concern. I think it’s completely normal if you don’t feel that you’re achieving what you want.

I would suggest asking for a meeting with your personal tutor and getting some feedback on what you can do to improve your work and achieve higher grades. I sometimes found the feedback notes a little vague and confusing and often reached out to whoever had marked my work for clarification.

Have you looked into what additional support your university offers for essay writing. At ARU the library team had group sessions on a range of different things to help students with their assignments. They also offer one on one sessions to help you improve grades etc. I’m sure your university will offer something similar, so look into that!

Also don’t be too hard on yourself. You’re working really hard and the first year of university is a big adjustment and sometimes it takes time to settle in. Don’t doubt yourself and be proud of your achievements.

I hope this helps and I hope you find some support to help you moving forward. Good luck!

Sophie 🙂

Reply 6

Original post
by chisa
I'm a first year Geography student at Uni of Sheffield and I've been getting my results back for my semester 2 assignments and they're not as good as I hoped they would be.
This is making me really think if an essay based degree is for me and making me a little worried about year 2.
Was wondering if anyone had any advice in general or any for essay writing??
Would be much appreciated
Thank you!!

Hi Chisa,

I am sorry to hear that the grades you have been receiving so far on your assignments haven't been what you were expecting.

Have you considered reaching out to your personal tutor, who will be able to provide you with some pointers on how to improve your essays further and provide you with any resources that you can access. As well as this in most universities within the library, you can access academic support tutors who can support you with study skills.

I hope this helps,

Matt
2nd year Physiotherapy student
Wrexham Uni Reps

Reply 7

Original post
by chisa
I'm a first year Geography student at Uni of Sheffield and I've been getting my results back for my semester 2 assignments and they're not as good as I hoped they would be.
This is making me really think if an essay based degree is for me and making me a little worried about year 2.
Was wondering if anyone had any advice in general or any for essay writing??
Would be much appreciated
Thank you!!

Hi @chisa,

I did English Language in A-Levels, and I'm currently studying psychology in uni - I would think that A-Levels would have prepped me for the tons of essay writing I do in uni, but it's definitely a big step up from college.

Unis often use first year to get everyone up to speed, so if your grades aren’t quite what you hoped, it doesn’t mean you’re not cut out for an essay-based degree. It just means you're still adapting, which is completely normal. Go through your assignments and see what the comments say, are you losing marks on structure, argument, critical analysis, referencing, or something else? Book office hours or a feedback meeting with your tutor/module leader to talk it through. Knowing exactly why you lost marks is the first step to improving.

Essay writing takes practice (and a few key strategies). Some quick tips:

Make sure your argument is clear and runs through the whole essay like a thread.

Use topic sentences to guide your reader through each paragraph.

Don’t just describe theories or case studies always ask so what? and link back to your main argument.

Keep referencing tight and consistent (your uni might have a guide or offer workshops).

Use your uni’s academic support. Most unis have writing centres or academic skills teams, they often do 1-to-1 sessions or workshops on essay writing, referencing, critical thinking etc. Don’t hesitate to use them, they exist for exactly this reason.

First year is about building foundations. Use this summer to review feedback and maybe even practice structuring or planning essays with past questions. Year 2 will feel more manageable once you’ve got a few more tools under your belt.

Rooting for you!
Danish
BCU Student Rep
Original post
by chisa
I'm a first year Geography student at Uni of Sheffield and I've been getting my results back for my semester 2 assignments and they're not as good as I hoped they would be.
This is making me really think if an essay based degree is for me and making me a little worried about year 2.
Was wondering if anyone had any advice in general or any for essay writing??
Would be much appreciated
Thank you!!

Hi there,

There are some superb tips in the replies on this thread, I just want to add one important advice. Most universities (I will be speaking of mine - DMU - as an example) tend to realise that more and more students often struggle with academic essays, especially in their first year. And because of that, there is usually quite a lot of support available for students in that regard. At DMU for example, we have weekly workshops and classes at library which all students can attend to master their essay skills. They also sometimes can give some actionable advice on your own essay drafts before you submit a final version. I believe it's worth checking the website of your institution for similar services.

Take care,
Ilya :smile:
Cyber Security Student at DMU

Reply 9

Original post
by chisa
I'm a first year Geography student at Uni of Sheffield and I've been getting my results back for my semester 2 assignments and they're not as good as I hoped they would be.
This is making me really think if an essay based degree is for me and making me a little worried about year 2.
Was wondering if anyone had any advice in general or any for essay writing??
Would be much appreciated
Thank you!!

Hiya @chisa ,
the first year of uni is meant for you to adapt to a new environment, new studying techniques and academic writing style 🤗 so it's totally normal to not get the exact grades you expected at first. Just like what the others have mention, it would be good to discuss your struggles with your personal tutor and subject lecturer. Personally I tend to take a long time writing essays so I prefer to start early and write my ideas in point form at first. Whenever I am stuck or need help I would contact my subject lecturer to ask for advice regarding academic text or when I am just stuck. Sometimes my lecturers are happy to read a rough draft with some questions to give some initial feedback before the essay submission ☺️ Getting a friend to help you read through your essay is also a great way to get a second opinion. I hope this helps and I wish you the best of luck in your 2nd year of Uni!

Zhi En
(Kingston Student Rep.)
Original post
by chisa
I'm a first year Geography student at Uni of Sheffield and I've been getting my results back for my semester 2 assignments and they're not as good as I hoped they would be.
This is making me really think if an essay based degree is for me and making me a little worried about year 2.
Was wondering if anyone had any advice in general or any for essay writing??
Would be much appreciated
Thank you!!

Hey,

It's understandable to feel worried and a bit deflated when your results aren't what you hoped for, especially in your first year. Many students feel this way as they adjust to the demands of university-level assignments. It's a big jump from college or school, and it takes time to get the hang of it.

Don't let this discourage you about whether an essay-based degree is for you just yet! University writing is a skill you develop over time, and year 1 is often about learning the ropes.

Here are some tips for essay writing that might help:

Plan your structure: Before you even start writing, outline your essay thoroughly. Think about your main arguments, supporting points, and how they'll flow logically from the introduction to the conclusion. A clear, cohesive structure makes a huge difference for the examiner.

Deep dive into research: Go beyond just the basics. Use all the materials your lecturers provide, but also explore other academic sources. The more you understand the nuances of the topic, the better your arguments will be.

Use university support: This is crucial! Your university will have study support services (often in the library or a dedicated academic skills centre) that offer one-on-one appointments, workshops, and online resources specifically for academic writing, referencing, and critical thinking. They are there to help you improve.

Talk to your lecturers/tutors: Never be afraid to ask for help. They can often provide specific feedback on where you went wrong or offer guidance before you even submit an essay.

Remember, every essay is a chance to learn and improve. You're building fundamental academic skills that will benefit you throughout your degree and beyond.

You've got this!😊
Rachel - Undergraduate Multimedia Journalism
(edited 8 months ago)

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