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i go on holiday in 20 days but i can’t stop thinking about answering paper 1 q5 english language wrong the question was “write a day technology stops for a day “ or something and i thought it meant write about a timw tech isn’t there my story is about kid named koa which means warrior in his native language and he is a heir to be a warrior to his people but does not feel confident in his ways he is constantly compared to his grandfather as they have the same name his grandfather is the opposite of him and shows his warrior like personality his father is fed up and asks to kill a lion with a staff to show his warrior like as so did his grandfather before the dad leaves his gives an envelope to his son so then koa goes and tries to find a lion and then while he’s walking he opens the envelope to see a pic of his grandfather and suddenly feels grief even tho he never felt close to him while he’s walking hw sees a building segregated from the others which represents koa being segregated from his villagers but the building is crusty y and musty but he hears a lion so walks in to see the building which nyeriot design is so beautiful and modern representing koa inner worth and then he is walks over and sees a mirror and sees his reflection then he hears the lion and goes up to kill it but then hears a noise he check to see the other lion gave birth and he was about to kill a family he was so ashamed with himself and trembles then the cub walks over and the staff glows golden representing his grandfather will i get low marks ??? HOWEVER THE QIEAYION WAS WRITE A SORY HERE TECHNOLOGY SOPS FOR A DAY however i used grade 9 phrases like The sky was a tapestry of obsidian ink, heavy with a crepuscular calm. thw first line in my story to talk about technology although not direct and Grief surged like a tide, dragging me under like a vessel caught in a merciless tempest when koa opened the envelope to see a pic of his great grandfather. and His words were laced with venomous poise, each syllable a meticulously sharpened blade( koa dad telling him to kill a lion ). and tThe light fractured through the stained glass, splintering into kaleidoscopic daggers of color and heat( description on building).and the silence was not empty ,but cacophonous - and orchestra of sore rap echoes and unseen dread ( this was a description on the building) SOMEONE PLS ANSWER IM STRESSINF OUT

i go on holiday in 20 days but i can’t stop thinking about answering paper 1 q5 english language wrong the question was “write a day technology stops for a day “ or something and i thought it meant write about a timw tech isn’t there my story is about kid named koa which means warrior in his native language and he is a heir to be a warrior to his people but does not feel confident in his ways he is constantly compared to his grandfather as they have the same name his grandfather is the opposite of him and shows his warrior like personality his father is fed up and asks to kill a lion with a staff to show his warrior like as so did his grandfather before the dad leaves his gives an envelope to his son so then koa goes and tries to find a lion and then while he’s walking he opens the envelope to see a pic of his grandfather and suddenly feels grief even tho he never felt close to him while he’s walking hw sees a building segregated from the others which represents koa being segregated from his villagers but the building is crusty y and musty but he hears a lion so walks in to see the building which nyeriot design is so beautiful and modern representing koa inner worth and then he is walks over and sees a mirror and sees his reflection then he hears the lion and goes up to kill it but then hears a noise he check to see the other lion gave birth and he was about to kill a family he was so ashamed with himself and trembles then the cub walks over and the staff glows golden representing his grandfather will i get low marks ??? HOWEVER THE QIEAYION WAS WRITE A SORY HERE TECHNOLOGY SOPS FOR A DAY however i used grade 9 phrases like The sky was a tapestry of obsidian ink, heavy with a crepuscular calm. thw first line in my story to talk about technology although not direct and Grief surged like a tide, dragging me under like a vessel caught in a merciless tempest when koa opened the envelope to see a pic of his great grandfather. and His words were laced with venomous poise, each syllable a meticulously sharpened blade( koa dad telling him to kill a lion ). and tThe light fractured through the stained glass, splintering into kaleidoscopic daggers of color and heat( description on building).and the silence was not empty ,but cacophonous - and orchestra of sore rap echoes and unseen dread ( this was a description on the building) SOMEONE PLS ANSWER IM STRESSINF OUT

Dont worry I did paper 2 question 5 edexcel lang wrong, I wrote an article instead of a speech. Apparently you still get marked on creativity as well as language and structure techniques.

i go on holiday in 20 days but i can’t stop thinking about answering paper 1 q5 english language wrong the question was “write a day technology stops for a day “ or something and i thought it meant write about a timw tech isn’t there my story is about kid named koa which means warrior in his native language and he is a heir to be a warrior to his people but does not feel confident in his ways he is constantly compared to his grandfather as they have the same name his grandfather is the opposite of him and shows his warrior like personality his father is fed up and asks to kill a lion with a staff to show his warrior like as so did his grandfather before the dad leaves his gives an envelope to his son so then koa goes and tries to find a lion and then while he’s walking he opens the envelope to see a pic of his grandfather and suddenly feels grief even tho he never felt close to him while he’s walking hw sees a building segregated from the others which represents koa being segregated from his villagers but the building is crusty y and musty but he hears a lion so walks in to see the building which nyeriot design is so beautiful and modern representing koa inner worth and then he is walks over and sees a mirror and sees his reflection then he hears the lion and goes up to kill it but then hears a noise he check to see the other lion gave birth and he was about to kill a family he was so ashamed with himself and trembles then the cub walks over and the staff glows golden representing his grandfather will i get low marks ??? HOWEVER THE QIEAYION WAS WRITE A SORY HERE TECHNOLOGY SOPS FOR A DAY however i used grade 9 phrases like The sky was a tapestry of obsidian ink, heavy with a crepuscular calm. thw first line in my story to talk about technology although not direct and Grief surged like a tide, dragging me under like a vessel caught in a merciless tempest when koa opened the envelope to see a pic of his great grandfather. and His words were laced with venomous poise, each syllable a meticulously sharpened blade( koa dad telling him to kill a lion ). and tThe light fractured through the stained glass, splintering into kaleidoscopic daggers of color and heat( description on building).and the silence was not empty ,but cacophonous - and orchestra of sore rap echoes and unseen dread ( this was a description on the building) SOMEONE PLS ANSWER IM STRESSINF OUT

IDK - ig u would get marks for creativity and stuff but my teacher said that she had capped off people from top band for not answering the question so.....