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Foundation year personal statement enquiry

Hi, I'm looking to apply for foundation years leading into law as I'm not happy with my UCAS grades as school cut off our chance for extra exams to up them from the year 12 exams. I was wondering as some unis have something like social sciences as a foundation year which can lead into a range of degrees. My personal statment is for law, but would i have to change my personal statment to make it enitrley relevant to the foundation year course?
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by tkkjj
Hi, I'm looking to apply for foundation years leading into law as I'm not happy with my UCAS grades as school cut off our chance for extra exams to up them from the year 12 exams. I was wondering as some unis have something like social sciences as a foundation year which can lead into a range of degrees. My personal statment is for law, but would i have to change my personal statment to make it enitrley relevant to the foundation year course?

Hi there @tkkjj ,

Since your personal statement is already made and about law and should illustrate your passion and experience in that field, you shouldn't have to alter it too much, as this should also relate to Social Sciences.

However, I do think some universities like you to talk about your undergraduate course and foundation year, so it might be worth mentioning both, by name, and
talking about what specific topics intrigued you to study the cours(es) at university. You could be more specific about how the foundation year could help you progress and supplement your studies, maybe mentioning some modules or concepts you would learn in the foundation year?

I hope this helps! 😊

Rehman, 2nd Year Accounting and Finance
Student Ambassador

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by Uni of Southampton Students
Hi there @tkkjj ,
Since your personal statement is already made and about law and should illustrate your passion and experience in that field, you shouldn't have to alter it too much, as this should also relate to Social Sciences.
However, I do think some universities like you to talk about your undergraduate course and foundation year, so it might be worth mentioning both, by name, and
talking about what specific topics intrigued you to study the cours(es) at university. You could be more specific about how the foundation year could help you progress and supplement your studies, maybe mentioning some modules or concepts you would learn in the foundation year?
I hope this helps! 😊
Rehman, 2nd Year Accounting and Finance
Student Ambassador

much appreciated thank you!
It's a bad idea to namedrop universities by name in your personal statement. Do bear in mind that your personal statement gets sent to all your uni choices so it needs to cover all your bases and not be specifically tailored to a single place.

I do not think it's necessary to say why you're doing a foundation year or why you're interested in, because your main goal is ultimately law still, but just in case I'm going to tag @04MR17 who is a little more knowledgeable on all things Personal Statement than myself, to double-check.
Original post
by tkkjj
Hi, I'm looking to apply for foundation years leading into law as I'm not happy with my UCAS grades as school cut off our chance for extra exams to up them from the year 12 exams. I was wondering as some unis have something like social sciences as a foundation year which can lead into a range of degrees. My personal statment is for law, but would i have to change my personal statment to make it enitrley relevant to the foundation year course?

Have you applied on UCAS already?
Do you want to do Law?
Are you sure?
So you want to do it this year?

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by 04MR17
Have you applied on UCAS already?
Do you want to do Law?
Are you sure?
So you want to do it this year?

Thats a yes to all of the questions, but i havent applied yet
(edited 1 month ago)
Original post
by tkkjj
Thats a yes to all of the questions, but i havent applied yet


So it's a no to the first question?

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Original post
by 04MR17
So it's a no to the first question?

yes
Original post
by tkkjj
yes


Okay cool, thank you.

I agree with Scotland Yard and Rehman that keeping the PS mainly focused on Law is the right thing to do. If you're applying entirely to foundation years then a couple of sentences explaining what you would hope to gain from a such a course is valid too.

More generally, you say you aren't happy with your UCAS predicted grades and I presume that you have had a conversation with your UCAS referee who has said they won't be making any changes to them? Despite perhaps some evidence of work in your subject that is of a higher standard?

Do your UCAS predicted grades preclude you from lots of law courses entry requirements in the UK or just the universities you had previously wanted to study at?

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by 04MR17
Okay cool, thank you.
I agree with Scotland Yard and Rehman that keeping the PS mainly focused on Law is the right thing to do. If you're applying entirely to foundation years then a couple of sentences explaining what you would hope to gain from a such a course is valid too.
More generally, you say you aren't happy with your UCAS predicted grades and I presume that you have had a conversation with your UCAS referee who has said they won't be making any changes to them? Despite perhaps some evidence of work in your subject that is of a higher standard?
Do your UCAS predicted grades preclude you from lots of law courses entry requirements in the UK or just the universities you had previously wanted to study at?

Thank you for your persistent responses. I have spoken with my UCAS team from sixth form, they're not willing to raise my UCAS grades, the reason i'm not happy was due to my performance in my year 12 mocks, where I just wasn't doing what I needed to do to get my target grades. I have now realised this, and I am fully confident of a much better performance by results day. For now I am making things work, so yes, I have been limited with my university options, and am willing to even take a gap year if my real grades are enough to apply to my aspirational universities.
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by tkkjj
Thank you for your persistent responses. I have spoken with my UCAS team from sixth form, they're not willing to raise my UCAS grades, the reason i'm not happy was due to my performance in my year 12 mocks, where I just wasn't doing what I needed to do to get my target grades. I have now realised this, and I am fully confident of a much better performance by results day. For now I am making things work, so yes, I have been limited with my university options, and am willing to even take a gap year if my real grades are enough to apply to my aspirational universities.


Except it's your school's choice to look at mock exams, they don't have to use these at all. It's the professional judgement of individual teachers who know you and your academic journey.

Reality is that if they don't have evidence that you will get that grade they're unlikely to put their name on something saying you will get that. The other factor is that if you really aren't likely to achieve that grade, regardless of your confidence level, then your teachers would be setting you up to fail by predicting you too high in your application because it'll be close to guaranteeing a visit to clearing on results day.

The question I asked was do your UCAS predicted grades preclude you from lots of law courses entry requirements or just the universities you had previously wanted to study at?

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