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Hello so im in y11 and i wrote an inspector calls paragraph and an introduction but i was wondering on what roughly would i get marked according to the AQA mark scheme also i was wondering if someone could give me some feedback and what more i could improve my answer with if that's ok .Thank you for your time

Q)How does priestly use the character of an inspector to suggest ways that society could be improved?

In this allegorical play, Priestley uses the inspector as a proxy to suggest his socialist views and challenging capitalist ideology.

In this anti -war play, Priestley uses the inspector as a mouthpiece to advocate for a fairer society .This is suggested when Inspector Goole highlighted Mr Birling's selfishness which he directly confronts and emphasizes that "public men have responsibilities as well as privileges". This displays contrast between the adverbs "responsibility" and "privileges",mocking the upper classes having advantages to criticise their wealth with no purpose. Priestley illustrates this as it resonates with his personal life with his time fighting in world war one where he saw soldiers sent of to die for their country whereas the upper class used their social inferiors .This made him furious at the injustices of the class system. Priestley portrays the inspector to make it clear to the capitalists that although they are free to enjoy the benefit s and luxuries of their lifestyles ,they must be responsible members of society who care about the working class that make their lifestyle possible.

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ethereal-bleach

Honestly, chatgpt is a good marker if you tell if what exam board you're in and to be a harsh marker- I'm at Alevel and my grades so far are A+A+AA and I make it mark me all the time to tell me where I went wrong lol. But also this isn't a completed essay, even I can tell that...
NB: NEVER use chatgpt to write essays for you. Use it to MARK your essays, use it to tell you what your strengths/weaknesses are, but NEVER use it to write something for you because that's plagiarism and also dumb

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