French Coursework (on emploi ideale)

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Kiki-kins
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I'm supposed to write a essay in french about my ideal job, but I find it really hard to write in large amounts and really need and want to get a good mark in french. If anybody could help point out any mistakes that I made or accents that need adding I would be sooo thankful! Here's what I've written so far:

On emploi ideale

Mon employs ideal serait therapist de la parole et de langue. Pour mon emplois ideal j’aurai besoin de 4 annees licence dans univercite et trios baccalaureats. C’est mon emplois ideal parce que j’aime la langue et la science, je pense la langue est geniale et interessante car les proffeseurs sont geniaux. Jaime la science mais le proffeseur est plutot penible. Le langue et les sciences est tres important etre un therapist de langue et parole.
Je vais faire un stage avec un therapist de la parole et de langue j’espere ca va m’aider avec qualifications socials. J’aurai besoin d’etre sympa et calme car je vais aider les enfants. Dans ma camber, j’ai une affiche de langue de signe et je suis etude la langue de signe, je pense c’est facile et ca va m’aider communiquez.
J’aurai enseinez les celebrites comme Johnny Depp comment a parle dans accents, j’espere va payez-moi beacoup d’argent! J’ aurai travailler petite heures et alle a beacoup de vacations

Thank you very much!
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Is your title 'My ideal job' or 'an ideal job'? 'Mon emploi ideal' for the former, 'un emploi ideal' for the latter.

employs' should be emploi
'j'aurai' - if you mean 'I will have', that's ok.. but if you want to say I would have, it should be 'j'aurais'.
'le langue' - it should be 'la langue'
'univercite' - universite
'j’espere va payez-moi' - j'espere que ca va me payer..
'je suis etude' do you mean 'I am studying? It should be 'j'etude' if so.
'je pense la langue', 'je pense c'est' - je pense que..
' ca va m’aider communiquez' - m'aider a communiquer.
'alle a beacoup de vacations' - If you want to say 'I will go on lots of holidays', it'd be 'je prendrai beaucoup des vacances'. Btw, aller is an irregular verb, so in the present you'd use je vais, tu vas, il/elle va, nous allons, vous allez or ils vont.
'J’aurai enseinez les celebrites comme Johnny Depp comment a parle dans accents' - What do you mean?
'Dans ma camber' - If you mean 'in my room', 'dans ma chambre'.
'qualifications socials' - sociales, as qualifications is feminine.
'J’ aurai travailler' - Do you mean to say 'I will work?' - Je travaillerai..

I've left out all the accents..
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'J’aurai enseinez les celebrites comme Johnny Depp comment a parle dans accents'

...is very bad and completly out of a dicionary. It's supposed to say 'I will teach celebrities like Johnny Depp how to speak in different accents'
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You can use aller + infinitive for the future tense: Je vais enseigner. The other option is to say J'enseignerai. This is simply the infinitive plus avoir endings (so for tu, you'd say tu enseigneras, il/elle enseignera and so on). This is for regular verbs. For verbs that are irregular in the future, it's different (eg. 'I will go' isn't 'j'allerai', it's j'irai). I think the whole sentence should be 'j'enseignerai les celebrites de parler avec des accents'.
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je m'appelle john. j'ai dix-huit ans. j'habite en Manchester

thats about it, and i got an A in gcse
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stashteea happiness in russian ti govraray pa rooskee
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(Original post by Unregistereds)
je m'appelle john. j'ai dix-huit ans. j'habite en Manchester

thats about it, and i got an A in gcse
j'habite a manchester ;p
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