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Reply 64960
Poems... mmm... i was never good at them.... they never make mnuch sense...
But i try to/...
ten years this day we met
we were kids we didn't fret.
But now times passed
and i'm moving on.
Whilst we look back and
in our eyes lingers tears.
We hold you close within our hearts
for the day for you we got to
Beyond these years we still need you.
Life was short and you were loved
By so many and the worst thing
You are so close but yet so far.
I shall always miss you.
... that One for a mate...
that was
then...
another one... for someone else.
In these eyes is my years.
1 and 7 tenths of this decade
have i lived
but there was scarcely a smile within
you were the one i loved
but its too late to say
for now we move further ahead
and you far behind.
Love is just a word
to describe what i should feel
but instead there is pain.
Elements
Was it one of the God squad? :ninja: Because my friend told me a good way to get rid of them if you don't want to ignore them or they've seen that you are in.




hehe nope, he said he was delivering guttering/pipes for 'peter brideson' who is one of my dads friends, but he doesnt live here! :eek:
Vienna:)
Poems... mmm... i was never good at them.... they never make mnuch sense...
But i try to/...
ten years this day we met
we were kids we didn't fret.
But now times passed
and i'm moving on.
Whilst we look back and
in our eyes lingers tears.
We hold you close within our hearts
for the day for you we got to
Beyond these years we still need you.
Life was short and you were loved
By so many and the worst thing
You are so close but yet so far.
I shall always miss you.
... that One for a mate...
that was
then...
another one... for someone else.
In these eyes is my years.
1 and 7 tenths of this decade
have i lived
but there was scarcely a smile within
you were the one i loved
but its too late to say
for now we move further ahead
and you far behind.
Love is just a word
to describe what i should feel
but instead there is pain.


You should take up poetry as a career... I loved the other one you sent me... :love: :hugs: :smile:
Reply 64963
creamcrackered
You should take up poetry as a career... I loved the other one you sent me... :love: :hugs: :smile:

awww :hugs: thanks :smile: :love::kiss:
damien rice makes me really sad :eek:
Reply 64965
sometimes i write really good ones and sometimes pretty naff. you can tell a mood by a poem.because when i was angry yopu could see by the terms i use and when i am happy its a joyful bouncy one..
Vienna:)
sometimes i write really good ones and sometimes pretty naff. you can tell a mood by a poem.because when i was angry yopu could see by the terms i use and when i am happy its a joyful bouncy one..


Oh... Yep...

I just make poems that rhyme and are funny.

I could do a soulful piece like yours, but it'd take effort :p:

I'm amazed you took the time to write it. Such an artist is thee :hugs:
:biggrin:

Thank-you FiL for the resizing for my avator! *points*

I love writing poetry. I miss it actually as I haven't had time because of studying and dramas etc.
Reply 64968
creamcrackered
Oh... Yep...

I just make poems that rhyme and are funny.

I could do a soulful piece like yours, but it'd take effort :p:

I'm amazed you took the time to write it. Such an artist is thee :hugs:

those ones took very little time... i just string words together to make a bit of sense... i could easily do one right now. completely off my head with nothing to spark off my thoughts...
Vienna:)
those ones took very little time... i just string words together to make a bit of sense... i could easily do one right now. completely off my head with nothing to spark off my thoughts...


Oh cool. Wish I had such motivation... :smile: :redface:

I think I have a one track mind though, I don't think I can concentrate on other topics for long enough to think up a great poem... :rolleyes:
Elements
:biggrin:

Thank-you FiL for the resizing for my avator! *points*

I love writing poetry. I miss it actually as I haven't had time because of studying and dramas etc.



awww i love your avatar! that's so cool :p:
Reply 64971
Elements... here is one for you...
Brief encounters with you i've had
No knowledge of what you do
Many days i have heard your name
but never knew just what to do
Because i never seen you.
The lightened day shines on you
And something new... you cool.
Reply 64972
oh i killed it with my crap poem. :frown:
Reply 64973
could just be that people are still in awe at its beauty
Twas a nice poem... I was just busy PMing...

but now I've gotta go... So, ya know bye bye bye bye people, whoever's bothered :rolleyes:

Cya :ciao:

:hugs: :suith: :kiss: and :flowers:

Tra

xx
Reply 64975
creamcrackered
Twas a nice poem... I was just busy PMing...

but now I've gotta go... So, ya know bye bye bye bye people, whoever's bothered :rolleyes:

Cya :ciao:

:hugs: :suith: :kiss: and :flowers:

Tra

xx

oh no :hugs: of course people will know that you are gone and they will miss you... me included :hugs::kiss::flowers::love:
Reply 64976
mute
could just be that people are still in awe at its beauty

awww :hugs: thanks but it aint that good:frown:
hey mute :wavey:
Reply 64978
Hiya jen :wavey: :smile: your avatar still has me mesmerised, so mesmerised it took me over 10mins to reply :redface:
mute
Hiya jen :wavey: :smile: your avatar still has me mesmerised, so mesmerised it took me over 10mins to reply :redface:



hehe aww :p:

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