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I wrote this poem this evening at work I haven't had the chance to give it a name - maybe you lot can

Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.

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Well it could be deeper (easily achieved with a few more lines). So I'm also stuck for a name.
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The World's Shortest Poem
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It sounds more like haiku because of its length...hmmmm *tries to think of name*
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That makes you sound famous! lol. Think about what you are trying to say - what is the meaning of the poem? maybe that will give you inspiration for the title.
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[COLOR=seagreen]give it a name
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I was depressed when I wrote it
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I was depressed when I wrote it
It sounds optimistic to me.
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The World's Shortest Poem
Actually that was 'written' by the legendary Muhammad Ali (he actually said it in some press conference I think). It goes like this:

"I am".

There you have it, the shortest poem in the world.
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ok, how's this

Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.

Flowers I brought for thee,
Have lasted for as long,
As the Moonlight you see,
And the Church Bells Song.

When in heaven you join me,
The days will be long,
And the summers we see,
Will last forever in thee.

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(Original post by a_musical_gal)
I wrote this poem this evening at work I haven't had the chance to give it a name - maybe you lot can

Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.

By A Musical Gal (1987 - )
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! SUICIDE AINT THE ANSWER!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! !!
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NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! SUICIDE AINT THE ANSWER!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! !!
rite and i put sucide in there where......
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rite and i put sucide in there where......
Sorry, I was being humourous:

Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone


Implies that we are mourning in passing.
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rite and i put sucide in there where......
Do not mourn me,
Now that I have committed suicide,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.

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Sorry, I was being humourous:

Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone


Implies that we are mourning in passing.
There was a person who slit her/his wrist..the end

or....

my mates essay when I was younger

title: 'there was a house on the haunted hill'

It fell down..The end
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The death of a bird
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I still need a title
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I still need a title
Call it 'if you notice this notice you will notice that this notice was never really worth noticing at all'
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What about 'Do Not Mourn Me'?

It sets the tone for the poem in that it introduces the theme and like the poem it's simple, to-the-point and sends a strong message.
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Don't mourn for me, I'm already dead.

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