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I wrote this poem this evening at work I haven't had the chance to give it a name - maybe you lot can
Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.
By A Musical Gal (1987 - )
Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.
By A Musical Gal (1987 - )
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Well it could be deeper (easily achieved with a few more lines). So I'm also stuck for a name.
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#5
(Original post by a_musical_gal)
By A Musical Gal (1987 - )
By A Musical Gal (1987 - )
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#8
(Original post by a_musical_gal)
I was depressed when I wrote it
I was depressed when I wrote it
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#9
(Original post by Light Bulb)
The World's Shortest Poem
The World's Shortest Poem
"I am".
There you have it, the shortest poem in the world.
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ok, how's this
Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.
Flowers I brought for thee,
Have lasted for as long,
As the Moonlight you see,
And the Church Bells Song.
When in heaven you join me,
The days will be long,
And the summers we see,
Will last forever in thee.
By A Musical Gal (1987 - )
Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.
Flowers I brought for thee,
Have lasted for as long,
As the Moonlight you see,
And the Church Bells Song.
When in heaven you join me,
The days will be long,
And the summers we see,
Will last forever in thee.
By A Musical Gal (1987 - )
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(Original post by a_musical_gal)
I wrote this poem this evening at work I haven't had the chance to give it a name - maybe you lot can
Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.
By A Musical Gal (1987 - )
I wrote this poem this evening at work I haven't had the chance to give it a name - maybe you lot can
Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.
By A Musical Gal (1987 - )
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(Original post by Bhaal85)
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! SUICIDE AINT THE ANSWER!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! !!
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! SUICIDE AINT THE ANSWER!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! !!
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#13
(Original post by a_musical_gal)
rite and i put sucide in there where......
rite and i put sucide in there where......
Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone
Implies that we are mourning in passing.
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#14
(Original post by a_musical_gal)
rite and i put sucide in there where......
rite and i put sucide in there where......
Now that I have committed suicide,
For I will protect thee,
With the beauty of my song.
By A Musical Gal (1987 - )
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#15
(Original post by Bhaal85)
Sorry, I was being humourous:
Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone
Implies that we are mourning in passing.
Sorry, I was being humourous:
Do not mourn me,
Now I'm that I'm gone
Implies that we are mourning in passing.
or....
my mates essay when I was younger
title: 'there was a house on the haunted hill'
It fell down..The end
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#18
(Original post by a_musical_gal)
I still need a title
I still need a title
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#19
What about 'Do Not Mourn Me'?
It sets the tone for the poem in that it introduces the theme and like the poem it's simple, to-the-point and sends a strong message.
It sets the tone for the poem in that it introduces the theme and like the poem it's simple, to-the-point and sends a strong message.
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