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whats wrong with this text?

my mate accidently read one of my txts i was gonna send to my friend and they just start start laughing really horribly at me. whats wrong with this message?i dont think its rude or anything when i asked what was wrong they just go 'nothing' and now im really embarrassed. but why is it wrong?

"hi dere baby sweetie how's my luv tday. i talk with my luv's frind about my der sweetie for 1 hour on the fone. wonderin if my luv's alrite n when can i c my luv? and i rilly sad my lu'vs not at uni tday cos i jus go and sit at the bac by myself looking rilly sad dat my luv's not wiv me there.then i go in the library, wonderin if my luv's theer but he isnt n i jus so lov my honey.wil he ansewr if i aske wat gift ll he lik?now i jus stay at home rilly wishing so terribly dat my luv'll giv me a call dat i can know hows my sweetie tdayn xxxxxx

the txt is to one of my best frinds

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Reply 1
Maybe if you didn't say "my luv" all the time....and if it's to your best friend why are you sending them "love texts".
Reply 2
i always text them like that.is it wrong? dont u txt people like that? he IS a guy btw
For a start it doesn't make much sense. Secondly it's very soppy.. if the last sentence is "now i just stay at home really wishing so terribly that my love will give me a call so that I can know how my sweetie is today" then come on.. it's Mills and Boon territory, so melodramatic and sickly that you just have to laugh.
Reply 4
I felt just one emotion when I read that:
:rofl:
Reply 5
omg is it wrong?should i take that bit out and write 'wishing rilly much dat my der baby give me a call later?''
Reply 6
visesh
I felt just one emotion when I read that:
:rofl:


why?
do u think my mate i sending it to thinks that? i always txt him like that :eek: ddo u think he laughing at me?
Reply 7
sounds needy. Honestly, i almost threw up. joke. but very soppy!
Reply 8
but thats my best frind!
do u thin he laughing at me?
magiccarpet
omg is it wrong?should i take that bit out and write 'wishing rilly much dat my der baby give me a call later?''


"I hope you'll give me a call later" will do just as well and it'll make sense and take up less space
Reply 10
theotherF.Poste
"I hope you'll give me a call later" will do just as well and it'll make sense and take up less space

or a "cb xx"

very economical:cool:
Reply 11
omg :eek:

how is itobnoxious? all my txts to this frind are like that! he always replys saying 'hi honey dont wory bout me been at work i rilly tired x' so does that mean he isnt annoyed by my way of texting? if i wrote 'hello how is ur day'' that sound really horriblele
visesh
or a "cb xx"

very economical:cool:


You kids and your text talk :p:

I'm not at all economical as I insist on writing texts in longhand :redface:
magiccarpet
omg :eek:

how is itobnoxious? all my txts to this frind are like that! he always replys saying 'hi honey dont wory bout me been at work i rilly tired x' so does that mean he isnt annoyed by my way of texting? if i wrote 'hello how is ur day'' that sound really horriblele


Then how about, "Hey sweetie, how's your day been"?
theotherF.Poste
You kids and your text talk :p:

I'm not at all economical as I insist on writing texts in longhand :redface:

Ditto. Can't do with all that text talk. That's what is killing spelling today! :eek:
Reply 15
theotherF.Poste
Then how about, "Hey sweetie, how's your day been"?

or "hiya howsu? gd day?"
Reply 16
:eek: i've never even seen a longhand text!! the version i wrote above was made more longhand than it was, ie frind=fd, home=hm,there=der
Reply 17
You can still use "txt spk" and be comprehendible...
predictive text = quicker for longhand
Reply 19
he'll understand what im saying! i dont see why its funny tho :mad: