Be clear, more direct about what the often complex ideas mean.
some excellent ideas, but because of the complexity of some of the ideas it is important that you note the overall rationale behind it. Clear and straight forward.
Some excellent ideas, but because of the complexity of some of the ideas, it is important that you note the overall rationale behind it. Clear and straightforward.
I can read that just fine. I've had essays where I have had to ask the teacher to read their criticisms to me, because whole sentences are completely illegible.