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Lazing in a mass of tulle and antique brooches
She contemplates disturbing the haze through half closed lids.
Her vacuum-packed vanity creates golden whorls in the dead sunset
As she lifts idle limbs and scrutinises.
Time does not affect her. It holds no importance.
For Will is her architect, her master and lover.
He placed her, with a wrought iron bedpost as a backdrop,
Heathcliff in an orchard.

Again the dusk seeps in, interrupting her thoughts and embracing
Nonchalant, rumpled bedclothes, brazen as the coral
About her mouth...Why does she not look about?
In her mind fingers lace like weeds in a pond,
Beautiful despite the surrounding stagnation.
Vanity draws wry comparisons.



I'll admit this was written in a sleepy half dream after finally finishing Skin by Joanna Briscoe at 4 in the morning. Its based on her protagonist, and it might be more than slightly obvious that I'd been analysing Sylvia Plath in Englsh that day.
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Edit: It's ****
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Well, at least you tried. If you like it, that's all that matters.
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Well, at least you tried. If you like it, that's all that matters.
you sound like a kindergarten teacher telling a three year old who's lost a race that it's the taking part that counts.
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Well, at least you tried. If you like it, that's all that matters.
:rofl: How faintly damning...
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i'm no poet, but that was rather marvelous. hats off to you missus.
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