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My french homework has to be in tomorrow and it is my last chance before parent's evening to show her I can actually do AS French. I'm currently on question 4 of 10 and each answer must be five lines long.

For question 4 (What do you like doing on holidays?), I'm changing tenses loads and I'm not very good at this so can someone check it for me

Pendant mes vacances, j'aime visiter des endroits d'intérêt. L'année dernière, j'ai visité la Tour de Eiffel pendant que dans Paris. J'aimerait avoir vu que La Mona Lisa mais il n'y avait pas assez de temps. L'année prochaine, j'espère voir la lutte de taureau avec mes cousins pendant notre vacances.

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During my holidays, I like to visit places of interest. Last year, I visited the Eiffel Tower while in Paris. I would like to have seen The Mona Lisa but there was not enough time. Next year, I hope to see bull fighting with my cousins during our holiday.
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Looks good (but what doesn't after a few brewskis...)!
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Maybe like this?

Pendant mes vacances, j'aime visiter des endroits d'intérêt. L'année dernière, j'ai visité le Tour Eiffel quand j'ai reste a Paris. J'aimerais avoir vu La Mona Lisa mais il n'y avait pas le temps. L'année prochaine, j'espère voir la lutte de taureau avec mes cousins pendant nos vacances.

Don;t take my word for it, I didn;t do A Level French...is that really A level standard???

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Maybe like this?

Pendant mes vacances, j'aime visiter des endroits d'intérêt. L'année dernière, j'ai visité le Tour Eiffel quand j'ai reste a Paris. J'aimerais avoir vu La Mona Lisa mais il n'y avait pas le temps. L'année prochaine, j'espère voir la lutte de taureau avec mes cousins pendant nos vacances.

Don;t take my word for it, I didn;t do A Level French...is that really A level standard???

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Its about a C standard for AS but I might get a B for the use of Conditional (AS standard) tense. If I was going for an B+ I'd say.

I enjoy visiting Paris and places of interest. I visited the Eiffel Tower which is very cool however I wanted to see the Mona Lisa but we did not have enough time - It was disappointing. When I going to Spain, I would like to see Bull Fighting with my cousins.

but I don't have enough time to write that!
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(Original post by a_musical_gal)
My french homework has to be in tomorrow and it is my last chance before parent's evening to show her I can actually do AS French. I'm currently on question 4 of 10 and each answer must be five lines long.

For question 4 (What do you like doing on holidays?), I'm changing tenses loads and I'm not very good at this so can someone check it for me

Pendant mes vacances, j'aime visiter des endroits d'intérêt. L'année dernière, j'ai visité la Tour de Eiffel pendant que dans Paris. J'aimerait avoir vu que La Mona Lisa mais il n'y avait pas assez de temps. L'année prochaine, j'espère voir la lutte de taureau avec mes cousins pendant notre vacances.

Which should mean

During my holidays, I like to visit places of interest. Last year, I visited the Eiffel Tower while in Paris. I would like to have seen The Mona Lisa but there was not enough time. Next year, I hope to see bull fighting with my cousins during our holiday.

I wouldn't take my word for this at all, it's late, I'm tired, but I'll do my best. It's good. A few things, I'll write it out.

Pendant les vacances, j'aime visiter des endroits d'interet. L'annee derniere, a paris, j'ai visite la Tour Eiffel. J'aurais aimé voir la Mona Lisa, mais je n'avais pas du temps. J'espere voir la lutte de taureau avec mes cousins pendant les vacances.

Hope that helps, a bit. I left off all the accents, too late for accents!
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