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Reply 1
When you say cohesive I assume that you are referring to teamwork. If so, can you not just say: "This has highlighted the importance of teamwork" or "This has highlighted the importance of a positive team spirit" etc?
yeah...but i have put this involvement in football has increased my team work skills as well as helping me to appreciate the importance of cohesive sportsmanship..so i would be repeating myself? Unless I could reword it somehow?

What do you think?
Thanks for the quick reply!
Reply 3
"As an active member of my school/county's football team I have learnt the importance of team work and positive sportsmanship." Perhaps?

Teamwork and cohesive sportsmanship refer to the same thing.

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