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Messed up with the girl ive liked for ages and want to write a poem for her watch

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    I really like this girl in my school and because we're never going to see each other again because she's going to uni and I'm starting a job in september I wanted to make a special effort to tell her how I feel before its too late. So I asked her as we left school if she wanted to get together over the summer and she said she's kinda busy which I figured was an excuse, so I said I've liked you for ages and she said she liked me a bit too but didnt want a relationship because of going to uni. So I said "I dont care if its only over the summer, we can just have a sex fling and I wont get attached to you, just shag so at the end of the summer we can go our separate ways and both be happy" and she got really offended and called me a shallow pervbag.

    I didn't mean I actually only wanted sex, I meant that a casual fling was better than nothing because I just really like her sexually and personally and now I've messed it up by telling her I'd be happy for it to be short term and casual and i'd put my feelings on hold for her because she means that much to me.

    I dont know what to do, I think I might write her a really romantic letter or a poem or something to prove I'm serious and not just wanting a quick shag but I'm really bad at writing stuff like that. Can anyone suggest something I could write to get her to want me please, I really like her and I let my horny side get the better of me lol do you guys think a poem would be a good idea to make me look deep, and what sort of thing could i put in one?
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    You can try but even if it's so romantic etc etc she will know that each excuse or each attempt to get with her will remind her that all you want is sex as you know you don't have much of a future after september.
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    No. Just no.

    Ring her. Say what you just told all the lovely strangers on the internet. Truth be told, it was a prickish thing to say and if she was already unconvinced you may well just have to cut your losses this time. Your best and probably only option is to just ring her up and be honest.
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    Lol! How you can even blurt that out without realising how moronic it's going to sound is beyond me :rofl:

    A poem probably won't heal it, sorry.
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    You are well and truly screwed. To be totally honest you have no chance. Cut your losses and move on.
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    Try a haiku.

    What I said was wrong,
    I don't want you on my dong
    I'm not a pervbag.
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    I'm determined to prove myself I've already started writing my letter and poem. Here's what Ive got so far.

    I truly love your beauty fair
    I want to nuzzle in your hair
    I didn't mean those cruel words
    I understand how you'd have heard
    My claim that all I want is shags
    But really darling, you're no ****
    And I'm no pimp, I'm really deep
    And long to watch you as you sleep
    In brightest dreams of heavenly bliss
    I ask of you for but one kiss
    To send my tender heart on wings
    To fly, and think of romantic things
    Like petals of roses and perfum'd scent
    And not just sex, that's not what I meant.


    What do you think so far?
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    No offence but imo if someoone said they wanted sex with me over the summer and then gave me a poem saying how much they loved me and stuff then i'd automatically thinck STALKER.

    Ring her. Say sorry. Say how you didn't mean for it to come out like that and you were nervous ect. Ask her if you want to catch a film and if not go out with a group of friends and work from there. Simples.
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    (Original post by Anonymous)
    I'm determined to prove myself I've already started writing my letter and poem. Here's what Ive got so far.

    I truly love your beauty fair
    I want to nuzzle in your hair
    I didn't mean those cruel words
    I understand how you'd have heard
    My claim that all I want is shags
    But really darling, you're no ****
    And I'm no pimp, I'm really deep
    And long to watch you as you sleep
    In brightest dreams of heavenly bliss
    I ask of you for but one kiss
    To send my tender heart on wings
    To fly, and think of romantic things
    Like petals of roses and perfum'd scent
    And not just sex, that's not what I meant.


    What do you think so far?
    I think my haiku summed it up far better.

    Nuzzle in her hair? Are you a horse?
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    (Original post by Anonymous)
    I'm determined to prove myself I've already started writing my letter and poem. Here's what Ive got so far.

    I truly love your beauty fair
    I want to nuzzle in your hair
    I didn't mean those cruel words
    I understand how you'd have heard
    My claim that all I want is shags
    But really darling, you're no ****
    And I'm no pimp, I'm really deep
    And long to watch you as you sleep
    In brightest dreams of heavenly bliss
    I ask of you for but one kiss
    To send my tender heart on wings
    To fly, and think of romantic things
    Like petals of roses and perfum'd scent
    And not just sex, that's not what I meant.


    What do you think so far?

    At the risk of sounding like a yankie;

    Are you for real???


    NoNoNoNoNo!!

    You've already blown it. Its too late. Move on.

    Harsh but true.
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    (Original post by Anonymous)
    I'm determined to prove myself I've already started writing my letter and poem. Here's what Ive got so far.

    I truly love your beauty fair
    I want to nuzzle in your hair
    I didn't mean those cruel words
    I understand how you'd have heard
    My claim that all I want is shags
    But really darling, you're no ****
    And I'm no pimp, I'm really deep
    And long to watch you as you sleep
    In brightest dreams of heavenly bliss
    I ask of you for but one kiss
    To send my tender heart on wings
    To fly, and think of romantic things
    Like petals of roses and perfum'd scent
    And not just sex, that's not what I meant.


    What do you think so far?
    dude no offence but if you send her that she might run off and live in a cave. Just call her would be much more simple
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    (Original post by Anonymous)
    I'm determined to prove myself I've already started writing my letter and poem. Here's what Ive got so far.

    I truly love your beauty fair
    I want to nuzzle in your hair
    I didn't mean those cruel words
    I understand how you'd have heard
    My claim that all I want is shags
    But really darling, you're no ****
    And I'm no pimp, I'm really deep
    And long to watch you as you sleep
    In brightest dreams of heavenly bliss
    I ask of you for but one kiss
    To send my tender heart on wings
    To fly, and think of romantic things
    Like petals of roses and perfum'd scent
    And not just sex, that's not what I meant.


    What do you think so far?
    Not bad but this line is a bit...:rolleyes:

    She probably doesn't want to hear that word at the end ever again!

    Simple solution is in spoiler...

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    Take her to the Eiffel Tower, propose and celebrate by eating & giving her a wedding present of 50 chicken wings...:ninja:
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    (Original post by James')
    I think my haiku summed it up far better.

    Nuzzle in her hair? Are you a horse?
    :rofl:

    *Meeeeeerrrr*...:llama:
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    (Original post by *MJ*)
    Spoiler:
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    Take her to the Eiffel Tower, propose and celebrate by eating & giving her a wedding present of 50 chicken wings...:ninja:


    She's a veggie.
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    (Original post by Anonymous)
    She's a veggie.
    :five:

    So am I...

    Chuck her my number:

    07...
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    I'm thinking of adding this line to the letter I'll write:


    "You are like an ornamental jewel-encrusted box, you're so pretty to look at anyway that putting something in you is just an added bonus"

    She did English A Level so I think she likes similes.
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    (Original post by James')
    I think my haiku summed it up far better.

    Nuzzle in her hair? Are you a horse?
    I actually LOL'd. ALOT.

    OP, Is that poem a joke?

    If you'd said what you said to me, i would've said the same as she did.

    If you then sent me that poem, i would break your nose.

    Baaaad move, imo.
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    (Original post by James')
    I think my haiku summed it up far better.

    Nuzzle in her hair? Are you a horse?
    I agree with this, are you a horse?

    On a serious note, don't send her a poem, I think to be honest she's already decided she doesnt want a short term relationship with you.

    Yes apologize to the girl for being a sex pest but then move on, if she wants u she will tell you.
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    (Original post by sarzbabe)
    I actually LOL'd. ALOT.

    OP, Is that poem a joke?

    If you'd said what you said to me, i would've said the same as she did.

    If you then sent me that poem, i would break your nose.

    Baaaad move, imo.
    :rofl:

    But you like chicken wings right?
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    (Original post by *MJ*)
    :rofl:

    But you like chicken wings right?
    As long as they're BBQ or chinese flavour
 
 
 
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