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  • View Poll Results: Who wrote the best poem?
    Terry Acky
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    Revolution is my Name
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    scott8anthony
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    23.08%
    Colonel Brusnahan
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    46.15%

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    I shall let my fellow TSRians decide as the pressure was getting to me


    So which one do you think is best and who should be winner of battle of the poetry?




    Terry Acky:
    oh sweet by and by,
    there seems to be so many lads catching your eye,
    so i'll join in, even though i am no robert brown,
    i'll write something courageous and not let you down,
    i may be taking this poem too far,
    like i did when i crashed my dads car.


    Revolution is my Name:

    Oh Sweet By and By,
    Please give me another try,
    I'll discard the double rhyme,
    This second time,
    To win you backy,
    from Terry Acky,
    And to..er...get you musnuhan,
    From Colonel Brusnuhan,
    And to show the OP who is hated,
    That you are far better than Cultivated,
    And to go through various troubles,
    To show you are better than Bubbles,
    And to show my love,
    By praying to the mods above,
    That this stalkerish thread won't be deleted,
    So our passion can become more heated.
    Here's some extra verses to make me more competitive,
    Although I'll try not be repetitive,
    As I ran out of material,
    Like a male looking for a girlfriend at Imperial,
    And the Colonel used some good stuff,
    Which has left me in something of a huff,
    But never fear,
    And don't shed a tear,
    For Revolution will provide,
    A brilliant and wide,
    Variety of ways to compare my love,
    Such as to the sky above,
    Which it is bigger and more great than,
    Which is as true as opposite over adjacent equals tan,
    And it is more beautiful than a Summer's day,
    As those are in fact invariably gay,
    Of course it also beats a good book,
    Unless of course it involves Peregrine Took,
    In that hobbitish case at least,
    I fear I must end this tale of beauty and the beast,
    For it seems that my love has a flaw,
    To do with a journey to Mordor.


    scott8anthony:

    Sweet by and by
    you're so pretty it makes me cry
    tears of happiness and of joy
    you're making a man out of this boy

    a glimpse of your wonderful red hair
    and i'm dazed for hours just wanting to stare
    and your luscious lips leave me mesmorised
    as i get lost in your eyes and fantasise

    cheap words may make this love seem fake
    but the direction you look makes my heart ache
    i want to watch you dance and hear you sing
    and take care of you my most cherished thing

    alas Revolution is my Name and Rizzletastic
    have already noticed you're fantastic
    so just a part of that magic enigma and mystery
    would make me the happiest man in history


    Colonel Brusnahan:


    Oh Sweet By and By
    This poem I send
    Like Jim from American Pie
    I will come again

    I need you like an addict needs crack
    Government needs tax
    Like Fat ******* needs Baby Back.............Ribs

    You're gonna love me the way my uncle did
    'Cept you're not gonna go to prison for doing it.
    We gonna love each other all night long
    At least until Scrubs comes on

    You hair, your smile, your eyes, your chest.
    Amongst many of the things that I like best
    Oh Sweet By and By, why protest?
    Was it because I forget the pregnancy test?

    WE can go on the run Olivia,
    TO somewhere exotic like Bolivia
    If that's too hot, we'll try France,
    But only if you wear edible underpants.

    Oh damn, that sounds weird.
    The dreadful moment I had feared
    For now, I'm all poemed out,
    If it helps, next time, I'll give Pete Doherty a shout.
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    I like the Colonel's one!

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    And the war begins.
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    When's the winner being announced?
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    (Original post by Revolution is my Name)
    When's the winner being announced?

    :dontknow:
    When the poll closes?
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    (Original post by Sweet by and by)
    :dontknow:
    When the poll closes?
    woah, I didn't realise polls ever closed
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    Those poems are too long for this time of night, can you sum each poem up in one word?
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    Mine where ever it is.
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    ah crumbs, I'm getting owned
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    (Original post by Revolution is my Name)
    ah crumbs, I'm getting owned

    Ooh, you should probably gather your followers to save you.
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    (Original post by Sweet by and by)
    Ooh, you should probably gather your followers to save you.
    Hmm, I wasn't aware I had any, but I'll nevertheless try my best
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    (Original post by *MJ*)
    Mine where ever it is.

    Sorry
    I made it before you sent me yours :/
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    scott8anthony, I like that one :yes:
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    (Original post by Sweet by and by)
    Sorry
    I made it before you sent me yours :/
    Post it anyway and people will tell you its the best!

    :yeah:
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    the colonel magingi
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    Can I enter?

    Here is my poem:

    Oh sweet by and by,
    chavs.
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    (Original post by ShortRef)
    Can I enter?

    Here is my poem:

    Oh sweet by and by,
    chavs.
    Are you referring me to a chav? :laugh:
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    (Original post by Sweet by and by)
    Are you referring me to a chav? :laugh:
    no it was in relation to another post i made yesterday :>
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    (Original post by ShortRef)
    no it was in relation to another post i made yesterday :>

    Mehh fair enough :p:
 
 
 
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