Information
Please remember you can see the criteria for each of the three categories here.
Tips on how to use the table
If a statement is irrelevant (i.e. wrong subject) = N/A
If it is ridiculously long = Red
Statement is a duplicate of another = * / ** / etc.
If you change your mind on a rating, don't delete it. Stike it through with the <strike></strike> tags and add the correction next to it.
Disclaimer
All reviews are done by members of the TSR Personal Statement Help Team who have significant experience in spotting common errors and mistakes in medicine personal statements. Although their judgements on personal statements are usually pretty spot-on, please be aware that rating personal statements is a very, very subjective business and our rating on a statement may not necessarily be the same rating an admissions tutor at a particular university would give. Please take the ratings as more an indicator of the quality of the personal statement, rather than an absolute declaration. If you are the original author of any of these personal statements and no longer wish it to be listed within this bank to help other applicants, please contact either Hygeia, Beska or Penguinsaysquack who will remove it for you immediately
Table of Ratings
Statement #HygeiaBeskaPenguinsaysquackGHxXxBaby-BooxXx
(Tie-breaker)xKTx
(Tie-breaker)FINAL RATINGADDED HEADER BAR TO STATEMENT?
Medicine 1YellowYellowYellowYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 2RedRedRedRedRED Done - Beska
Medicine 3RedRedRedRedRED Done - Beska
Medicine 4RedYellowRedRedREDDone - Beska
Medicine 5YellowYellowYellowYellowYELLOWDone - Beska
Medicine 6RedYellowRedRedRedRED Done - Beska
Medicine 7YellowYellowYellow/RedYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 8N/AN/AN/AN/AN/AN/AN/A - TURF WST
Medicine 9RedGreen RedRedRedREDDone - Beska
Medicine 10YellowYellowYellowYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 11RedRedRedRED Done - xXxBaby-BooxXx
Medicine 12RedRedRedRedRED Done - xXxBaby-BooxXx
Medicine 13RedGreen YellowRedRedYellowRED Done - xXxBaby-BooxXx
Medicine 14RedGreen YellowYellowRedYellowRED Done - Hygeia
Medicine 15RedRedRedRedREDDone - PSQ
Medicine 16 *RedRedRedRedRED Done - PSQ
Medicine 17 *RedRedRedRedRED Done - PSQ
Medicine 18YellowYellowYellowYellowYellowYELLOW Done - PSQ
Medicine 19YellowYellowYellowYellowYellowYELLOW Done - PSQ
Medicine 20RedRedRedRedRED Done - PSQ
Medicine 21RedRedRedRedRED Done - PSQ
Medicine 22RedRedRedRedRED Done - PSQ
Medicine 23YellowGreenYellowYellowGreenYELLOW Done - PSQ
Medicine 24RedRedRedRedREDDone - PSQ
Medicine 25RedRedRedRedRED Done - PSQ
Medicine 26RedRedRedRedRED Done - PSQ
Medicine 27RedRedRedRedREDDone - PSQ
Medicine 28RedRedRedRedRED Done - PSQ
Medicine 29YellowGreenYellowRedGreenYellowYELLOW Done - Hygeia
Medicine 30RedRedRedRedRED Done - PSQ
Medicine 31RedRedRedRedREDDone - Hygeia
Medicine 32RedRedRedRedRED Done - Hygeia
Medicine 33RedRedRedRedRED Done - Hygeia
Medicine 34YellowYellow/RedYellowYellowYELLOW Done - Hygeia
Medicine 35RedRedRedRedREDDone - Beska
Medicine 36YellowYellow/GreenGreenYellowYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 37YellowYellowYellowYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 38YellowYellowYellowYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 39YellowYellowGreenYellowGreenYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 40YellowYellowYellowYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 41YellowYellowYellowYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 42RedRedRedYellowRED Done - Beska
Medicine 43RedRedYellowRedRED Done - Beska
Medicine 44YellowYellowGreenYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 45YellowYellowRedYellowYELLOW Done - Beska
Medicine 46YellowYellowYellowYellowYELLOWDone - Beska
Medicine 47RedRedRedRedRedRED Done - Beska
Medicine 48RedRedRedRedRedRED Done - Beska
Medicine 49YellowYellowGreenYellow
Medicine 50YellowYellowRedRed
Medicine 51RedRedRedRedREDDone - PSQ
Medicine 52 ***RedRedRedRed
Medicine 53RedRedYellowRed
Medicine 54RedRedYellowRed
Medicine 55 ***
Medicine 56YellowYellowYellow
Medicine 57RedRedRed
Medicine 58RedRedRed
Medicine 59YellowYellowYellow
Medicine 60RedRedRed
Medicine 61YellowYellowYellow
Medicine 62YellowYellowYellow
Medicine 63 **
Medicine 64RedRedRed
Medicine 65RedRedRed
Medicine 66Red
Medicine 67Red
Medicine 68Red
Medicine 69Yellow
Medicine 70Red
Medicine 71Yellow
Medicine 72Red
Medicine 73Green
Medicine 74RedRed
Medicine Found. Yr 1RedRed