Could you rate my poem
Hello to everyoneI am writing this post because I would like to read your feedback about a poem that I wrote recently. I am not a natural English speaker and this is the first time that I approach to write in English. Your opinion and advice will be very valuable to make a progress.
I usually read poetry and write , but in Greek which is my mother language
Anyways , this is the poem ...
CONCRETE ME
letters red and blue
a shadow watching every move
Just stare the echo
The scream of the dust
It's calling
It's calling
There's no turning back
I usually read poetry and write , but in Greek which is my mother language
Anyways , this is the poem ...
CONCRETE ME
letters red and blue
a shadow watching every move
Just stare the echo
The scream of the dust
It's calling
It's calling
There's no turning back
(edited 2 years ago)
What is the poem about and what inspired you to write it?
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